I stopped sending my kalam to this forum..

[sharib]

Reading 479/ 277 or more but reaction only one or two .

That is why I stopped otherwise whenever I wrote a new kalam it was posted here....but I stopped now.

Regards

Sharib

[Ashvazdanghe]

2 hours ago, sharib said:

Reading 479/ 277 or more but reaction only one or two .

Salam have you posted it for it's reward or receiving reaction which if you have posted your Kalam for honoring Ahlulbayt (عليه السلام) so therefore you will recieve it's reward whether someone has given reaction to it or not but on the other hand if you just have done it for receiving reaction so therefore your efforts have been void .

[sharib]

On 1/14/2023 at 3:42 AM, Ashvazdanghe said:

Salam have you posted it for it's reward or receiving reaction which if you have posted your Kalam for honoring Ahlulbayt (عليه السلام) so therefore you will recieve it's reward whether someone has given reaction to it or not but on the other hand if you just have done it for receiving reaction so therefore your efforts have been void .

Dear Ashvazdanghe  Salam e masnoon, 

You are among the ones who normally react to posts thank you for that , however,

you would agree when

a kalam is written and posted  in praise or aza of ahlulbait, its reward from Allah and ahlulbait is well documented.

The purpose of the poet or writer is not only to seek sawab and reward for himself , he also wants to communicate certain facts or re-emphasize the beliefs or to put a thought in circulation among momeneen. 

Also to create sharpness in discussing and understanding  literature  on an " adabi" note .

So reaction of readers with criticism is more important than appreciation. It gives an estimate to the writer as to  how much he is able to communicate to the readers.

This part of involvement from the readers is missing in this (Urdu) forum. 

This is the reason I tried to wake the sleeping reader....nothing  else.  

I shall  re start   sending with a hope that my message has been received by co readers

(Response delayed as I was not visiting this site due to engagements)

Kind Regards

[Ashvazdanghe]

7 hours ago, sharib said:

So reaction of readers with criticism is more important than appreciation. It gives an estimate to the writer as to  how much he is able to communicate to the readers.

This part of involvement from the readers is missing in this forum. 

This is the reason I tried to wake the sleeping reader....nothing  else.  

I shall  re start   sending with a hope that my message has been received by co readers

Salam i gues that not receiving critism is due that your poems are in Urdu without a brief description in english which some users who undesrstand Urdu after reading it may leave some comments in Urdu also writing poem is mostly based on inner thoughts & emotions so critism of it becomes hard which maybe other users can critisie poem due to grammatical errors which it seems in Urdu your poems have no grammatical errors which we can't judge poems based on translation of it with common translators likewise google translator which we only can understand genaral content of poems.

[AbdusSibtayn]

On 1/14/2023 at 2:12 PM, sharib said:

Reading 479/ 277 or more but reaction only one or two .

That is why I stopped otherwise whenever I wrote a new kalam it was posted here....but I stopped now.

Regards

Sharib

Salam @sharib bhai, 

I can understand your disappointment.

But do remember that not all the members who read your works understand Urdu, or have sufficient command over it to critically evaluate your poetry.

Engagement on posts in SC has overall gone down in the recent years. I myself am not able to come here regularly.

I appreciate your poetry, and would request you to tag me in your subsequent posts should you post new ones here. I'll check them when I log on.