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In the Name of God بسم الله

A Painting Of You

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A Painting of YOU

I took once my colors to paint YOU

Truly from where to start I have no clue

The images i have are really so few

What elements I should have in my view?

Let my picture has a sky & let it be blue

Also a river with the same color too

It will include a sun? yellow! I knew

Then four roses standing in a queue

Blue will be two while red the other two

Finally a white horse with a beautiful cue

I started with blue and painted the sky

Blue is for you and thus it is high

The river was wide and I can stand by

It also was clear crystal like an eye

Then it was the sun yellow as in July

Was shining but dare toward it to pry

Later the four flowers; blue, red and shy

YOU are the fifth but not with them why?

I then painted the horse, white I apply

It was gorgeous; you can ride you can fly

Finally I am painting YOU; Oh my GOD, NO

Who can just imagine what i really saw

The blue sky is crying blood you know?

The river as well has stopped to flow

The Sun wishes to be down and even below

I can hear her moan, listen to her crow

Begging a cloud to avoid seeing the show

the four flowers fainted and has no glow

They became red not anymore blue; nor in row

Moving in circles, the horse holds his tow

The tears in his eyes; he is trying to stow

Not white but also with red as cut by a saw

Standing up sometimes then kneeling so slow

What happened to my painting why all is red?

It’s blood! It left the paper! All over it spread

I can feel the dim; black is all over shed

It is YOU in my picture but why with no head?

Why YOU are sleeping? why with no bed?

Where is the horse? why this lady instead?

Why she is holding YOU up? what she said?

Why she has no veil? I can't look ahead

The flowers are moving bleeding and shred

They surround YOU all, but one just sped

She screamed “MY SON” are you really dead?

“MY SON HUSSEIN” to whom I shall dread

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