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(salam)

A breathtaking piece. The simplicity works perfectly and the last line works well as the ending. It's almost like I want more, but at the same time, it doesn't need more at all. Also the contrast between the mercy and the pain (sharp knives, bullets etc) adds to the drama of it all.

One thing I would say is "more sharper" is grammatically incorrect and takes away from the beauty of the poem. But that is the only bad word I have against it.

Well done.

(wasalam)

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