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Blissful

Life Without You

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The promised petal from the bundle of flowers

once stood full and vibrant

voluminously glowing.

But at the forces of tyranny

it reluctantly departed into the winds

and traveled the horizons.

Under the skies it witnessed its admirers

having eyes as red as the petal itself

stained with an aching love.

How it wished to be with the flowers of Mecca

of Madinah, Karbalaa and Kufa

That aching separation could not be cured

and it continues to wait for Divine Command.

Here in my solitude, I ponder

and begin to sway in unison with the petal I can't see

Years have passed and here I stand

shaking in awe of what my eyes have not witnessed.

It is unfathomably pleasurable that I share the same pain that you do, my Beloved

And I wonder if you see the crimson stained tear that falls down my cheeks as I remember

that your Birth was the beginning

and that your absence has no end

Death continues to spare me when it knocks at my doors

and unmercifully paralyses me

with the veracious pain of longing.

I plead you my Beloved,

while I drown in the sea of my bloodstained tears;

to save me from the waters of darkness

and fill them with your light.

Come back from the valleys you roam

and solace the illness of my heart

because all it takes is just one glance

to cure your Shia's insanity.

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Blissful

I don't understand since my enligh is not my first lanuage and I have no time to look up those words, yet. Probably not a good memory either but that is not it.

I got a fraction of an understanding. Wheither I disliked it because it was bad or i don't understand well enough is yet to become proven.

Peace

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Blissful

I don't understand since my enligh is not my first lanuage and I have no time to look up those words, yet. Probably not a good memory either but that is not it.

I got a fraction of an understanding. Wheither I disliked it because it was bad or i don't understand well enough is yet to become proven.

Peace

Asalaamu alaykum.

That is okay. If there's anything you need me to explain, please ask and inshaa'Allah it will become clearer to you.

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You question? This has brightened me up! :)

I will leave the computer now while I am happy.

And I rest assured that you have written a good poem.

You know? I heard once that a ninja (that is me) can know the time by the eyes of a cat.

Well, I looked at the eyes of you responders and they said it was good.

The responses to you always are very good.

So people are probably talking the true since I base .... Ah. Sorry ...

Wonderful :)

Appreciated

Respected

And your signature. It is very nice too.

Errors can be good like ... Ah! Sorry.

:)

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You question? This has brightened me up! :)

I will leave the computer now while I am happy.

And I rest assured that you have written a good poem.

You know? I heard once that a ninja (that is me) can know the time by the eyes of a cat.

Well, I looked at the eyes of you responders and they said it was good.

The responses to you always are very good.

So people are probably talking the true since I base .... Ah. Sorry ...

Wonderful :)

Appreciated

Respected

And your signature. It is very nice too.

Errors can be good like ... Ah! Sorry.

:)

Thankyou for your comment. I'm glad you're happy and that you liked it!

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