The Father Of Palestine

[Blissful]

Smiling

There he sat watching his children in his heart

Picturing their laughs and songs.

Speechless

His eyes had reached the broken, polluted sky

He still saw God.

Reminiscing

The moments he shared with his wife

her caressing hand on his cheek.

Listening

The shots did not stop him from hearing:

Come, these arms will catch you from below.

Feeling

The blood oozing from the cracks

Of a heart freshly punctured

Looking

One by one, his offspring fell

Like dominoes.

Smiling

His child’s face fell infront of his; the warmth of blood

Meeting at last.

Watching

The soldier that walked away from a life

Lives. Freshly taken.

Weeping

the tears stung the ruptured wrinkles

which once folded at the site of his daughters' eyes.

Calling

From his soul cried out

God we are coming, accept this sacrifice.

- Fatima

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[timeless]

O.M.G. fatoom, that was.........that was..........AMAZING!!!!

:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

mahsallah, you are really really good at this, dont stop!!!!!!!!!! keep writing!!

inshallah i wish you all the best!!!

:cry:

it nearly made me cry, seriously, its fantastic!!!

:wub:

[Sukayna866]

Tenderly depicted. Beautifully written.

[Blissful]

(salam)

Thankyou girls, your comments are appreciated!

:)

(wasalam)

[baradar_jackson]

Beautiful poem.

Fatoum is a modern-day Ali Shariati with her political poems. :yaali:

[Al-Englisi]

touching poem. Mashallah

[DoubleAgent4]

Very touching :cry:

[guest022017a]

excellent

[baklava]

i love it!!

every time i reread it, its like :cry:

keep writing!

;)

[habib e najjaar]

:o :o

subhanAllah. this. is. amazing!

can i share this?

*may i share is rather? :blush:

[Blissful]

:o :o

subhanAllah. this. is. amazing!

can i share this?

*may i share is rather? :blush:

Of course you can :)

Thankyou for your beautiful comment my dear!