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In the Name of God بسم الله

Deewan E Khuram


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Shair e mohteram, janab Khuram sahib,

salams,

aAp key ashaar ney tu dhoom macha dee hai.

public key behad esrar per, shair mohtam sey request hai key apney tamam ashaar es thread per jama karain takay sab aAp key kalam sey mehzooz ho sakain.

khas toor sey aAsteen key saanp wala, mai e saAnp ki tokri key.

acha khayal hai na?

ws

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Shair e mohteram, janab Khuram sahib,

salams,

aAp key ashaar ney tu dhoom macha dee hai.

public key behad esrar per, shair mohtam sey request hai key apney tamam ashaar es thread per jama karain takay sab aAp key kalam sey mehzooz ho sakain.

khas toor sey aAsteen key saanp wala, mai e saAnp ki tokri key.

acha khayal hai na?

ws

yes we needed a dustbin for these wink.gif

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shairi may qadam rakha nahi rakhwaya hay

Naraaz mayray DOST - tayri mehar bani

it is understood that

my every sher needs

correction so ,

i will not request again n again

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start, in the name of God

Khoda ki zaat may kaysay koe shareek karon

mayray Hussain sa dynya may naKhoda bhi nahi

salam KB,

oho ye to ulta moamla hogaya , mayray apnay shero ki autopsy unsure.gif

well ghazal kahan , i m running out of urdu vocab

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No one knows I've lost a friend,

he had to be with me until the end.

he turned away and never returned

Why couldn't he see what he has done?

I think of him when I'm at home,

and most of the time when I'm alone.

I never thought it would end this way

yes in deed i miss him, everyday.

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u think u are always right

but with u i can not fight

its me and this darkness

thinking of u all the night

like you moon is in the veil

wish u were here to give me light

c u all in the afternoon

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dil may hay mayray magar, dil say nahi hay apnay

uski batoon say mujhay , jhoot ki bo aati hay

dil to chahta hay k han , kehdon may unkay mo per

youn mayri cheen k q , neend tumhain aati hay

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karigar tuj ko ,ebadat ka saleka he nahi

usko poja hay jisay ,khod hi tarasha tu nay

kia banay ga tera jab, hojaeay ga es ka soda

be wafa bot hay esay , sath teray rehna nahi

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^ welcome back KB

an allegation

waysay to nazrayn jhoka laytay ho apni foran

han magar apna koe dil may chupa rakha hay

kal to tha khod ko bohat tumnay sanwara laykin

aaj q etna bura haal bana rakha hay

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sara bazaar , unsay jo bayzaar tha

sirf may he , akayla kharedaar tha

aaj daykho , ye kaysai ghari aagai

unkay lab pe hansi , may jo bemaar tha

i know how far u are but greater is not the distance

let me know if u miss me , i ll be there in an instant

because love can travel faster than light

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Deewan-e-Khuram nahi, DEEWANA KHURAM hona chahiye, Please correct your Urdu hijabi.gif

no it can not be , because dewana to kisi na kisi ka hota hay banda, per no one is there

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(salam)

kia khoob silsila hae hum deewan k mukaml hone se pehle he lutf andoz ho rahe hen achee si shaeree se!

ezaz yahee milta hae sukanwar ko jahan men

log to behlol se dana ko bhi kehte the dewana!

waise ye roman urdu men chape ga na???

intear rahe ga k amad kb is dhage men piroen ge shaer bhae!

Allah kare zore qalam aur ziada!

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sorry i missed , can u say it again

what u didnt say , i heard it anyway

i knew u ll run away but i am sure

the portrait of love won't fade away

Dear kb n shauzeb ,

sorry i am addicted to poetry cant get rid of it , my heart is out of space , i need to post them here

u came to me , i was pleased with luck

but it was your lonliness not my love

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u stabed , just to make me cry

but in ur love i was ready to die

they say now i will rest in peace

every 1 listen to me , dont punish him plz

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salam Khuram,

okay...now this is wayyyyy out of the Islamic limits, that is your profile pic i am talking about!

khudkashi key barey mien tu sochna bhi haraam hai.

aur wesey bhi TRAIN TU DOSRI PATRI PER ANEY WALI HAI KHURAMMMMM. w00t.gif

ACHA WHATEVER IT IS PLEASE COME OUT OF IT SOOOOON.

we all like you and want you to have a long and happy life.

WS

was just relaxing ,

out of islamic limits ? my shorts ? blush.gif ,

o ye i know so side is haram ,

waysay its the only track , two way traffic wink.gif

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Maula Ali ASWS se poocha gaya: Aap ko apnay kis rutbay per fakhar hey? Asadullah, Waliullah, Nafs-e-Nabi ya Wasi-e-Nabi?

Maula Ali ASWS replied: Mujhay do cheezon per fakhar hey; (1) Mein Abu Talib ASWS ka Beta hoon, (2) Mein Bibi Fatema ASWS ka Shohar hoon.

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Maula Hasan ASWS se sawal kiya gaya: Aap apni Jaddah Bibi Fatema ASWS kay zikr per bay-ikhtiyar riqqat kis museebat per kertay hain?

Maula replied: Jo zalim ne darwaza giraya tha, us ki meykhain (keel) meri Maa kay shikam mein paywast ho gai thi, jis ki wajah se mera Bhai Mohsin ASWS shaheed huwa, wo zakham itna kaari tha kay meri Maa bhi shaheed ho gain, mujhay wo manzar qayamat tak rulaye ga.

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Fatema aap kay gharanay mein azmaton ka koi hisab nahi

Murtuza ka jawab hain Abbas koi Abbas ka jawab nahi

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Maula Jafar-e-Sadiq ASWS said:

Har museebat ka wazeefa hamari Dadi Bibi Fatema ASWS ki Tasbeeh hey, is liye har kaam kay liye Tasbeeh-e-Bibi Fatema-tuz-Zahra ASWS perha karo.

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Maula Jafar-e-Sadiq ASWS said:

Agar Tasbeeh-e-Bibi Fatema-tuz-Zahra ASWS se afzal koi amal hota tou Maula Rasoolallah SAWAW Bibi Fatema-tuz-Zahra ASWS ko zaroor taleem detay.

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Maula Muhammad Baqir ASWS said:

Aey Jabir, Khuda ki qasam, qayamat kay din Bibi Fatema-tuz-Zahra ASWS apnay muhibbon ko is tarah chun lengi jis tarah parinday acchay daano ko kharab daano mein se chun letay hain.

Reference: Tafseer-e-Furaat Pg-298, Biharul Anwaar Vol-8 Pg-51, Al-Qatra Vol-4 Pg-39

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Muhammad ko Khuda kay Noor ki tanveer kehtay hain

Ali ko Auliya dunya mein apna Peer kehtay hain

Janab-e-Fatema ko Geyrat-e-Tatheer kehtay hain

Hasan ko Amn ki Tasveer ki Tauqeer kehtay hain

Husain Ibne Ali ko Ashq ki Tafseer kehtay hain

Jo in Paancho ka munkir ho ussay Khanzeer kehtay hain

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Khuda wo hey jo qatray ko faiz-e-aam karay

Nabi wo hey jo Khudai ka intezam karay

Kaaba wo hey jisay sajda har khaas-o-aam karay

Ali wo hey jisay Kaaba khud salaam karay

Fatema wo hey jis ka Nabi uth ker ehteram karay

Hasan wo hey Allah jannat jis kay naam karay

Husain wo hey jo sar kata ker bhi neyzay per kalaam karay

Abbas wo hey jisay wafa khud salaam karay

Momin wo hey jo Karbala kay zikr ko aam karay

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salam Khuram,

lagta hai deewan jald hi mukammal ho jaai ga inshaAllah.

ab kisi aur mozun per bhi tu likhney ki koshish kijiye. kuch, bersaat, bahaar, bulbul, koyel, khizan waghaira per bhi likhiyie.

rozmarra zindigi hi mien her waqt insaan kisi na kisi surat e haal sey do chaar rehta hai. aap ney bhi mushaheda kiya ho ga.

wohi sab likhney ki koshish karain.

aAp bohat achcha likh rehey hain. saath mien urdu adab padhna bhi shoru ker den. naaiye alfaz bhi milney lagain gain.

ws

salam aapi

ab barsaat say kabhi lutf andoos nahi hua ,

bahaar daykhi nahi ,

bulbul say mila nahi ,

koyal ko suna nahi ,

khizan pasand nahi

kia likhon en pe ? 

g bilkul, mushahida likhnay ki koshish zaroor karonga . but vocab ka problem hay , kindly refer a book or literature koe e book ho to kia  he baat hay.

bas beginning hay acha to khair nahi likh raha per i knew appreciate karna to aapki aadat hay, thanks a lot

and thank you all of you who visited  more than 500 times and liked this D1

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(bismillah)

Salam!brother shaer Khurram,

Salwat for your good health and May Allah bless you with lots of happiness and May your life be blessed with success.:)

aur haan ye last sher se khuch ye yaad aya k:

ghafil tughe gharyal ye deta hae manadi

gardoon ne gharee umr ki ik uar ghat dee

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