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naqshipa

Talaash e Wafa...

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aik bilkul taza ghazal aap sab ke zoq e sher ki nazr...

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Naqshipa

salam,

ghazal bohat achi hai. pehlay misra main hasrat o yas aur mayosi hai. aisy be basi ki kaifiyat jo ek lambay safar kay baad, manzil tak na pohanchay per, beech rah main himmat har kar,thehar janay ka faisla kartay waqt hoti ho. dosra misra cover up hai!

main sochta hon kay tu charagar nahi mera

main apna zakhmay tamanna tujhay dekha tu doon

main fitratan hi khud aAzar hon, rahon ga sada

sookoon kaisa agar tujh ko bhool bhi jaon

shaiir khwabon ki dunyan main nahi rehta, balkay haqeeqat ko qobool kartay howay, intehai bebasi kay alam main, kuch arzoain o tamannain phir bhi dil main hain. ye bohat khobsoorti say bayan kiya hai aap nay.

nigah main hain tery zakhm ha-e-mehroomi

main tujh say apni shikaston ka haal kaisay kahon.

bohat hi khoob.

ek acha shaiir, kitni asaani say aapnay ehsasat ko alfaz main dhal deta hai.

aur phir khakay batool, os per ''tabsirA'' kar qoam o millat kay aqal main ayee bat ko bhi, gar bara deteen hain!!!

bohat mazrat!!

amad jari rehna chahiyee.

ws.

Edited by khakay batool

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