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Apne Peghaam Ashaar Ki Soorat Rawana Kijiye...

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salam,

bohat din ki ghair hazri laga dee aap nay. Allah karay sab khairiyat rahi ho.

ye she'r padh ker foran aik hi chehra be-sakhta zehn mien aya.

hamaray Abbu hazoor ka!!!! :blush:

ws

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w/salam

Shukr hay Khuda ka, itni duaon ki wajah sey sab qayriyat hay abhi tak!!!

hamaray Abbu hazoor ka!!!! :blush:

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salam,

(wasalam)

sher bohat acha hai.

koi shak nae bila shuba

mazrat kay saath pooch rehai hain kay thora wazan theek nahi lag raha hai.

agar zehmat na ho tu dobara check ker lain, baraai meherbani.

ho sakay tu shair ka naam bhi share karain.

mazrat ki zaroorat nae, laga mughe bhi aisa but ye mughe yun hi sunaya gaya ,shair ka pata nahen, aap ko pata chale to share kareye ga

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us k paas reh kar b raabita naheen hota

us se baat karne ka hoslaa nahen hota

men wahan ja basa hun jis zamenn pe aksar

haadse to hote hen mojeza nahen hota

Edited by SHAUZEB

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email aAyie, sirf aik jumlay ki!! :( :(

bahar haal, hum nay aik taweel nazm likhi es aik jumlay per

..aur phir bhi wo sab kuch na keh paai jo es aik jumlay mien tha!!!

do ashaar hazir hain.

ãیŸ ÌÓ ˜æ ˜ã Óÿ ˜ã ãÍÓæÓ ˜ÑäÇ ÇÀÊی ÀæŸ

ÇõÓی ˜ی ÈÇÊ ˜æ ÇÊäÇ Óã̪äÿ ˜یæŸ áی ÀæŸ

ÌÀ ãیÑÿ Ïá ˜ی áیæŸ Óÿ ˜Èªی ÒÑÇ äÀی ʪÇ

ÇÈ Çäÿ ÀÇʪ Óÿ ÎØ ÇõÓ ˜æ ᘪäÿ ˜یæŸ áی ÀæŸ

..

Array Janab Hamain Btayen Na,Ya Lijiya Maza Karan,

...

ÇÈ Çäÿ ÝیÕáÿ Ñ ÎõæÏ Çõá̪äÿ ˜یæŸ áی ÀæŸ

ÐÑÇ Óی ÈÇÊ Ñ ÇÊäÇ È˜ªÑ äÿ ˜یæŸáی ÀæŸ

æÀ ÌÓ ãæÓã ˜ی ÇÈ Ê˜ ãäÊÙÑ Â䘪یŸÊªیŸ ãیÑی

ÇÓی ãæÓã Óÿ ÇÈ ãیŸ ÇöÊäÇ Ñäÿ ˜یæŸ áی ÀæŸ

ãõ̪ÿ äÇÏیÏÀ ÑÓÊæŸ Ñ ÓÝÑ ˜Ç ÔæÞ Èªی ʪÇ

ʪ˜ä ÇÄŸ Óÿ áŠی Àÿ Êæ ãÑäÿ ˜یæŸ áی ÀæŸ

ãõ̪ÿ یÀ ÇÑ ÏیæٰÇÑی ˜ی ÑæäÞ ãÇÑÏÿ ی

ãóیŸ Çö˜ Çã˜Çä ʪی ãäÒá ˜Ç ãŠäÿ ˜یæŸ áی ÀæŸ

ãیŸ ÌÓ ˜æ ˜ã Óÿ ˜ã ãÍÓæÓ ˜ÑäÇ ÇÀÊی ʪی

ÇõÓی ˜ی ÈÇÊ ˜æ ÇöÊäÇ Óã̪äÿ ˜یæŸ áی ÀæŸ

Ìæ ãیÑÿ Ïá ˜ی áیæŸ Óÿ ˜Èªی ÒõÑÇäÀیŸ ʪÇ

ÇÈ Çäÿ ÀÇʪ Óÿ ÎØ ÇÓ ˜æ ᘪäÿ ˜یæŸ áی ÀæŸ

ÈÏä ˜ی Ñǘª ʘ Ȫی ÑÇÓÊæŸ ãیŸ äÇŸ Èÿ ی

ÈÑÓÊی ÈÇÑÔæŸ ãیŸ ÿõæŸ Óáõäÿ ˜یæŸ áی ÀæŸ

æõÀی ÓõæÑÌ Àÿ Ïõ˜ª ˜Ç ªÑ یÀ ÇیÓÇ ˜یÇ ÀõæÇ Àÿ

ãیŸ ÊªÑ Êªی Êæ ÂÎÑ ÇóÈ ªáäÿ ˜یæŸ áی ÀæŸ

..

Wasalam

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Mein sar kay bal gira tha gunahon kay bojh se

Dunya samajh rahi thi kay sajday mein hey para

Sajday mein jab gaya tou logon ne yeh kaha

Zalim ne itni pee hey kay madhosh hey para

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Reh na pao gey kabhi bhula ker dekh lo

Yaqeen nahi aata tou aazma ker dekh lo

Har jagah mehsoos hogi kami hamari

Apni mehfil ko kitna bhi saja ker dekh lo

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Dheeray dheeray door hotay gaye

Waqt kay aagay majboor hotay gaye

Ishq mein hum ne aisi chot khai kay

Hum beywafa aur woh baykasoor hota gaye

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..

Array Janab Hamain Btayen Na,Ya Lijiya Maza Karan,

...

اب اپنے فیصلے پر خُود اُلجھنے کیوں لگی ہوں

ذرا سی بات پر اتنا بکھر نے کیوںلگی ہوں

وہ جس موسم کی اب تک منتظر آنکھیںتھیں میری

اسی موسم سے اب میں اِتنا ڈرنے کیوں لگی ہوں

مُجھے نادیدہ رستوں پر سفر کا شوق بھی تھا

تھکن پاؤں سے لپٹی ہے تو مرنے کیوں لگی ہوں

مُجھے یہ چار دیوٰاری کی رونق ماردے گی

مَیں اِک امکان تھی منزل کا مٹنے کیوں لگی ہوں

میں جس کو کم سے کم محسوس کرنا چاہتی تھی

اُسی کی بات کو اِتنا سمجھنے کیوں لگی ہوں

جو میرے دل کی گلیوں سے کبھی گزُرانہیں تھا

اب اپنے ہاتھ سے خط اس کو لکھنے کیوں لگی ہوں

بدن کی راکھ تک بھی راستوں میں ناں بچے گی

برستی بارشوں میں ےُوں سلُگنے کیوں لگی ہوں

وُہی سُورج ہے دُکھ کا پھر یہ ایسا کیا ہُوا ہے

میں پتھر تھی تو آخر اَب پگھلنے کیوں لگی ہوں

..

Wasalam

salam,

bohat khoob.

laikin hum ko tu bas wo do ashaar hi likhna thay jo theme kay mutabiq hain!!!

ws

Edited by khakay batool

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Ñ ãÆ ÍÓÑ Ê äÇ ˜Çã Óÿ Ìá ÌÇ Êÿ ÀیŸ

Àã ÑÇ Ûæ Ÿ ˜ی ØÑ Í ÔÇ ã Óÿ Ìá ÌÇ Êÿ ÀیŸ

ÔãÚ ÌÓ Â ãیŸ ÌáÊی Àÿ ÓÍÑ Àæ äÿ ʘ

Àã ÇÓی  ãیŸ ãäÇ ã Óÿ Ìá ÌÇ Êÿ ÀیŸ

ÌÈ Èªی  ÊÇ Àÿ ÊیÑÇ äÇã ãیÑÿ äÇ ã ˜ÿ ÓÇ Êª

ÌÇ äÿ ˜یæ Ÿ áæ ãیÑ ÿ äÇã Óÿ Ìá ÌÇ Êÿ ÀیŸ

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Ñ ÝÇ ÞÊæ Ÿ ãیŸ æ ÞÇ Ñ ˜ªæ äÇ ˜æ Æ Óäÿ Ç Êæ ˜یÇ ˜Àÿ Ç

یÀ Ïä ˜Ç Óæ äÇ ¡ یÀ ÔÈ ˜Ç Ñæ äÇ ˜æ Æ Óäÿ Ç Êæ ˜یÇ ˜Àÿ Ç

Èی ȪäæÑ ãیŸ ªæ š ÂÊÿ Êæ ÈÇ Ê Êã À یæ Ÿ äÀ  Êی

یÀ ÊیÑÇ ÓÇ Íá À áÇ Èæ äÇ ˜æ Æ Óäÿ Ç Êæ ˜یÇ ˜Àÿ Ç

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ᘪ ˜Ñ ÀãÇÑÇ äÇã ÒãیŸ Ñ ãöáÇ ÏیÇ

Çõä ˜Ç ÊªÇ ˜ªیá Îǘ ãیŸ Àã ˜æ ãáÇ ÏیÇ   

  

likh kar hamara naam , send ka button daba deya

unka tha khayl, sotay may hamko jagadeya

us k paas reh kar b raabita naheen hota

us se baat karne ka hoslaa nahen hota

men wahan ja basa hun jis zamenn pe aksar

haadse to hote hen mojeza nahen hota

yar i like it

Dukh fasana nai ke tujh se kahin

Dil bhi maana nai ke tujh se kahin

Aaj tak apni be kali ka sabab

Khud bhi jaana nai jo tujh se kahin

ye to sms lagraha hay

ãäÏÑ Æÿ¡ãÓÌÏ Æÿ¡یÑæŸ ÝÞیÑæŸ Óÿ ãáÿ

ǘ ÇõÓ ˜æ Çäÿ ˜ÿ áÆÿ ˜یǘیǘیÇ¡ ˜یǘیÇ ÀæÇ

jabhi to aajkal hamaray sect may bhi , sabkay colors nazar aarahay hain

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hamrah ap k hame dozhak bhi ha qaboool

ab junnat me ja ker hijar k sadme uttae kon

Salam ,

On the lighter side:

From the Sher , it is certain that Mashooq is "dozakhee".

For he/she can never enter Junnat...

Is it so ?

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ye shair abhi abhi kaha hai.........................ghazal pori kerni paday gee. :)

مرے ہر شعر کو اپنے لیے نہ جان کہ تو

خوش فہمیوں میں گم ہوا ناداں سنبھل سنبھل

wah kya shair hai. let me give it a try.

Mere har shair per sundi ki tarah attack karne waale

khush ho jaa ke mere paas koi anti sundi spray nai

I guess bohat bhadda shair kaha hai maine but anyways try to kiya

Edited by saba fatima naqvi

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wah kya shair hai. let me give it a try.

Mere har shair per sundi ki tarah attack karne waale

khush ho jaa ke mere paas koi anti sundi spray nai

I guess bohat bhadda shair kaha hai maine but anyways try to kiya

salam,

yahan tu badhay talented loag mojood hain. bilkul badha nahi hai, balkay bohat hi mazey dar hai. ye lejiyie aik koshish aur kijie..

اب وہ جو چل دیاہے تو ہے تُو کیوں مضطرب

کمبخت، نارسا دل ِ حیراں سنبھل سنبھل

Edited by khakay batool

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salam,

yahan tu badhay talented loag mojood hain. bilkul badha nahi hai, balkay bohat hi mazey dar hai. ye lejiyie aik koshish aur kijie..

اب وہ جو چل دیاہے تو ہے تُو کیوں مضطرب

کمبخت، نارسا دل ِ حیراں سنبھل سنبھل

Arre is per try nai kar sakti yeh to kuch ziyaada hi mushkil hai.pata nai kitne urdu ke diwaan chaantne pareen ge.challen koshish karo gi.aur yeh to sanjeeda shair hai is mein mazahiya pan kahan se laaoon.

Edited by saba fatima naqvi

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Arre is per try nai kar sakti yeh to kuch ziyaada hi mushkil hai.pata nai kitne urdu ke diwaan chaantne pareen ge.challen koshish karo gi.aur yeh to sanjeeda shair hai is mein mazahiya pan kahan se laaoon.

:)

yehi tu kamal hoga kay es sanjeeda shair ko bhi mazahiya banaya ja sakey. chalin hum entezar karain gain.

deewan channey ki zaroorat nahi hai, khud hi soachtee rehain.. kuch na kuch likh hi lain gee aAp aur hamari ghazal bhi mukammal ho jaai gee es hansi mazaaq mien.

ws

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Here ya go sis khakay Batool.isko parhne ke baad aapka dil apna sir dewaar ke saath maarne ka karega.is forum per barre ba-zauq afraad ka aana jaana hai yeh aapne humein kis kaam pe lagaa diya.

maana ke loot ke na tum aao ge phir kabhi

jaana hi hai to jao,barre shauq se jao

yeh jaante ho tum ke hain mareeze Angina Pectoris

phir bhi isse keh leen ge," dil e nadaan sanmbhal sanmbhal"

Edited by saba fatima naqvi

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:)

yehi tu kamal hoga kay es sanjeeda shair ko bhi mazahiya banaya ja sakey. chalin hum entezar karain gain.

deewan channey ki zaroorat nahi hai, khud hi soachtee rehain.. kuch na kuch likh hi lain gee aAp aur hamari ghazal bhi mukammal ho jaai gee es hansi mazaaq mien.

ws

:wub:o mero bhooli behna meri reputation ko - ve se +ve mein laane ke liye mere shair se kyun muttafiq ho rahi hain.Karne deen jo bhi - kar raha hai mainoon koi farq nai painda:P . Agar muttafiq hona hai to aur forums mein jayeen aur wahaan green deen jahan uska haq banta hai. aur shair kaisa lagga zaroor batayeen .Meine us mein bhi medical ko ghuseera hai.

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