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In the Name of God بسم الله

Apne Peghaam Ashaar Ki Soorat Rawana Kijiye...


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lol,

bohat acha hai.

hamari maniyie aur sanjeedgi say shaiiri shoro ker dijiyie.

(shoaAra say mazrat kay saath!!!)

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aap bhi kia yaad karain , moazrat qabool ki

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Here ya go sis khakay Batool.isko parhne ke baad aapka dil apna sir dewaar ke saath maarne ka karega.is forum per barre ba-zauq afraad ka aana jaana hai yeh aapne humein kis kaam pe lagaa diya. maana

yar i like this shayr but its " bohat bari ghalat fehmi"

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aap say yehi tawaqqa thee!

badhi meherbani aap ki.

laikin shair e mohteram, talaffuz tu theek ker lain........... lafz mOazrat nahi, mAzrat hai.. :)

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kia karain halaq say sounds nikalnay ki adat par gae hay na

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haaAain!!!

itna por dard shair!

waisay hai bohat acha. kis ka hai?

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Lagta hay pasand nahee aaya

Ye bhi Mirza Ghalib hi ka shair hay

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Lagta hay pasand nahee aaya

Ye bhi Mirza Ghalib hi ka shair hay

kamaal hai..

''waisay hai bohat acha'' kay yehi mani hotay hongay aap ki lughat mien, k pasand nahi aya!!

Mirza ghalib aur kisi ko pasand na aAiyie............aisa bud zoaq koi ho hi nahi sakta.

acha ..........tu aap hum ko bud zoaq keh rehai hain. :(

ws

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kamaal hai..

''waisay hai bohat acha'' kay yehi mani hotay hongay aap ki lughat mien, k pasand nahi aya!!

Mirza ghalib aur kisi ko pasand na aAiyie............aisa bud zoaq koi ho hi nahi sakta.

acha ..........tu aap hum ko bud zoaq keh rehai hain. :(

ws

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Naa Aysa Bilkul nahee hamara matlab wo nahee thaa

Aapki Nazar aur zauq tou la jawab hay.. ye tou aap khud bhi jaanti hain

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Aap mein se koi kisi ko naam le ke ya bina naam lye peghaam dena chahae tou de sakta hai ashaar ki madad se is thread mein ........

Peghaam kisi insaan ke naam bhi ho sakta hai zindagi ke naam bhi ya koi bhi ..................jo bhi aap ka man chahae ...jiske naam bhi aap peghaam dena chahaein..............

Aapne peghamaat ashaar ki soorat rawanaa kijiye

Salaam, subhaan Allah, bhout khoub. WS

kamaal hai..

''waisay hai bohat acha'' kay yehi mani hotay hongay aap ki lughat mien, k pasand nahi aya!!

Mirza ghalib aur kisi ko pasand na aAiyie............aisa bud zoaq koi ho hi nahi sakta.

acha ..........tu aap hum ko bud zoaq keh rehai hain. :(

ws

nice Ghalib, Anis , Dabeer, Taqi Mir wrote very well.

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salam Amra,

hum ko kiya maloom tha kay kabhi aAp ko hi peghaam bhaigna padh jaai ga! arz hai,

''chalay bhi aAo kay gulshan ka karobaar chalay''

q kia aapnay milkar bokay shop kholni hay ?

waysay ye koe acha karobar to nahi hay

khair halal ki rozi hay , mana bhi q karain

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ÔÇیÏ ˜Óی á˜یÑ ãیŸ á˜ªÇ Àæ ãیÑÇ äÇã

Çÿ ÏæÓÊ ÇäÇ ÀÇʪ ã̪ÿ Ïی˜ªäÿ Êæ Ïÿ

shayad eshi tarha say ban jaeay mayra kaam

ay dost apni answer sheet mujhay daykhnay to day

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Êõæ ˜ÀíŸ Èªی ÑÀÿ ÓÑ Ñ ÊíÑÿ ÇáÒÇã Êæ Àÿ

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in lakero say aik apna purana shayr yaad aagaya

ye rasmo rewaj zaabtay mujh ko nahi pasand

azaad aadmi hon beloved , koe lakeer ka faqeer nahi

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Mera taajaub kuch ajab nahi hai.

Wo shakhs pehley sa ab nahi hai.

Wafa ka kia gila karon mein us se.

Wo mera kab tha jo ab nahi hai.

Hum samundar ki tarah zarf wasee rakhte hain Mohsin.

Dil mein tufaan bhi ho to chehrey pay sukoon rehta hai.

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ÎÏÇ äÕیÈ ˜Ñÿ Çõä ˜æ ÏÇÆãی ÎæÔیÇŸ

ÚÏã æÀ áæ Ìæ Àã ˜æ ÇõÏÇÓ Ñ˜ªÊÿ ÀیŸ

Salam ,

kabhee kbhar hee is unwan per aana hota hai.

Sarsaree nigah se dekha to pata chala ke Aap ne aur doosre doston bahot he umda ashar pesh kiay hain.

Ada-m Lahoree ka yeh sher itna umda he ke ,beghair likhe raha na gaya.

Lekin Nasir kazmi ka woh sher shayad yun hona chahiye:

˜Èªی ÑæÆÿ ˜Èªی Ê̪ ˜æ ˜ÇÑÇ

ÔÈ öÝÑÞÊ Èšی ãÔ˜á Óÿ ˜ÇŠی

Shab-e furqat badee mushkil se "Guzree".

Wassalam

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Aye RAAB khak se tu ne mujh ko banya

Phir bi main teri baryai jaan na paya

BACHMAN se le kr jawani tak jab main pohncha

Apne andar aik gharoor takabar sa paya

nekiyon ko jama karne kijaab bhi baat ayai

Dil main sirf aik hi khayal aya

Dunia main jama kr akharat main boht waqat hai baqi

phir jab din beetny lage to waqat guzarne ka khayal na aya

ghabraya us waqat jab mout k far[Edited Out]e ko apne qareeb paya

us ne kaha waqat khatam ho gya ab cholo

is duna ko to RAAB ne fani hai banaya

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salam Saba,

bohat khoob, bohat acha hai aur ''Khuda janay'' bhi bohat umda hai.

amad jari rehna chahiyie hai.

ws

salam,

jab aap khud hi sure nahi hain, tu phir tashi kaisee!!

shayed 'kaati' hi sahi ho. dekh ker, confirm kijiyie baraai meharbani.

ws

Salam KB,

Suna hai ke Lucknow mein barah-e rast kamiyon kee taraf ishaara nahin karte---zara lehaz rakht-e hain, is liye Shayad, wayad laga ke baat karte hain....

mujhe "guzree" per zyadah bharaosa hai "katee" per kum...confirmation aap kee taraf se ho to zyadah achcha hai, kyonk-e Nasir Kazmi kee kitab mujhe abhee dasteyab nahin hai.

Wassalam

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Tahe baar sange garaan hai dil

Ke hai khak khak atta hoa

Kahin fard fard se raabte

Kahin shehar bhar se katta hoa

Mujhe bheejte ho samundaroon

Ke safar pe kis liye doosto

Meri nao bhi hai chiddi hoi

Mera baadban hai phatta hoa

Jab bhi hoa hai jamae insaaf taar taar

Naazil hoi hai qoom pe aafaat beshumaar

Woh hizbe ikhtelaaf ho ya hizbe iqtedaar

Ab qoom ko raha na kisi pe bhi aitebaar

Mazloom ke makaan mein kahaan se ho roshni

Roshan khayal karte hain zulmat ka kaarobaar

Dushman ko hum se khoof ho lahaq muhaal hai

Hum to woh soorma hain ke karte hain khud pe waar

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آپ شادی شدہ تو ہوں گے ہی!

بچے کتنے ہیں، بیوی ہے کہ نہیں؟

Parhtay He Laga Jasa Mujh Sa Pocha Gya Ho,Foran Apka Pichla Post Kiya Hua Shair Samnay Aa Gya,Bus Wohy Jawaab Ha..

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شکستہ پائ ارادوں کے پیش و پس میں نہیں

دل اُس کی چاہ میں گم ہے جو میرے بس میں نہیں

salam,

bohat khoob.

Faiz??

Nahy مصطفی زیدی

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Khoob Kaha

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un kay dekhay say jo aAjati hai munh per rounaq

wo samajhtay hain kay beemar ka haal achcha hai

unkay daykhay say jo aajati hay hamko hansi

wo samajtay hain k kisi nay gudgudi lagaie hay

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