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A Tribute To My Fav Poetess Parveen Shakir

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kamal chef tha jis nay pakaie biryani us din

Maza ja saka hai mayray mo say ab bhi nahi

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aur kia khoob tasvir kia ap nay, nashipa!! bohat nazakat kay sath.

byhad nawazish khakay batool k is per mamoli si kawish pe nzar dali ap ne wrna log to kmal benyazi se nzarandaz kr jate hen

hoslaafzay ka ek bar phir shukrya

ap ki muntakhab ghzal bi khob hei

mehzoz hoa

"hisab-e-darBAdary tujh say mang sakta hai

ghreeb -e-shehar magar itna be adab bhi nahi"

wah

khosh rahye

naqshipa

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Salam ,

Sirf ek sher kee zahmat hai.

Mujhe Parveen Shaakir ka yeh sher bahot zyadah pasand hai, iske khoobi par koyee tapserah kare to achcha hoga :

Yeh aane waala naya dukh bhi uske sar hee gaya

Chitakh gaya meri angushtari ka neelam phir.

wassalam

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wah sharib sb. kamal shyer sunaya ap ne

aur khakay batool ap ka inayat karda ye sher

"maza hi shair sunanay ka kuch nahi jab tak

qaseeda goyoun main wo nuktachee-n nahi ata"

.......kya kaha jaye, kya he kaha jaye

ap dono khush rahen

naqshipa

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umr ka bharosa kia, pal ka sath ho jai

ek bar akailay main os say bat ho jai

ye to bilkul galat baat hay

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Salam sharib,

es shair per aAp hi tabsera kartay tu kitna acha hota. waisy ye bat tu feerozay kay liay mashhoor hai shayed?

Shukria,

Yeh qaul Neelam ke liye hee mushoor hai, firoz-e ke liye nahin.

Neelam ek violent stone hai jise 30 saal kee umr ke baad pahanna chahiye..aisa log kaht-e hain ..mujhe nahin maloom haqueeqat kya hai.

Mujhe yeh sher is liye zayadah pasand hai ke parveen shakir ne ise ek "istaareh" ke taur par istemaal kiya hai aur Uskee yaani Neelam ki is khoobi ka bahot umda faidah uthaya hai. Meree naquis aql mein jo baat aayee hai likh deta hoon.

Yahaan par Neelam mashooqa ka beloved hai....ek aisee bharpoor shakhsiyaat jo mashooq par aane waali saari balaaon ko apne oopare leti hai.

Ab dobara sher padhein:

Yeh aane waala naya dukh bhi uske sar hee gaya

Chitakh gaya meri angushtari ka neelam phir

Naya....uske sar hee.....[this time and every time also]

Anghustari ka neelam....[beloved]

Aur "Phir" [again ..repeatedly ...not for the first time] jaise alfaaz ke maanaweeeyat dugni ho jaate hai.

wassalam

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Bahot pyaree ghazal hai .....aur mushkil bhee.

Aakhree sher padh kar Iqbal ka sher yaad aata hai:

Jis khet se dahqan ko mayassar no ho rotee ,

us khet har khosha-i gandum ko jala do.

wassalam

Edited by sharib

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Bahot pyaree ghazal hai .....aur mushkil bhee.

Aakhree sher padh kar Iqbal ka sher yaad aata hai:

Jis khet se dahqan ko mayassar no ho rotee ,

us khet har khosha-i gandum ko jala do.

wassalam

:) apse sukhanshanaas ke lye , Sharib ,ye ghazal kyunkar mushkil thehree hmm?!!

zehan ke hathon ko zara dilki dharkanon ke hathon ke supurd kijiye aur in ke hamqadam is ghazal ki raahon mein kho ke dekhiye , aisa idraak ho ga yun ehsas ke dareche waa hon ge ke ap heran reh jayen ge ......

Mere dilke qareeb bhi aur meri behud pasandeeda ghazal hei yeh ....

:)

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parveen shakir ke qalam se ata karda do shahkaar jo zaati taur pe meri pasand hein..

Faseel-e-shehar per thi zarb-e- kaari

Kamaa.n daaron ka shauq-e-sheharyaari

Kehan fankaar ko mar ke bhi haasil

Azaab-e-zindagi se rastgaari

Hujoom-e-rang mein bhi dil ka maslak

Kissi ahd-e-wafaa ki paasdaari

Uusi chehrey se auron ki parakh hai

Abhi tak hai wohi ik shakl pyaari

Wo khud jab tootne waala hu'a tha

Mein haari bhi to kaise waqt haari

Zamee.n Maa.n ki tarah hai her sitam per

Bas ik harf-e-du'aa honton se jaari

Kissi beemaar ki bai-yath mein roshan

Hamaari gardanon pe surkh dhaari

Aseer-e-Karbala jab yaad aa'en

Kehan lagti hai phir zanjeer bhaari !!

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Kis shehar mein la'ee khush kalaami

Dil Se-rabbi -o-rafeeq Shaami (Se-rabbi: belonging to Yasrab)

Sab Faiz ussi shafaq nazar ka

Kya cheez hai meri lala faami

Jo apne kamaal ki jazaa le

Kis kaam ki aisee nek naami ?

Sab ishq karen ge--aur sachcha

Hai apne qabeele mein ye khaami

Jazbat hi kuund hain to bekaar

Talwaar ki laakh be-nayaami

Aankhon se rawaan hai joo-e-khoo.n..per

Pehli si nahin subuk kharaami

Ye rasam to "Meer" se chali hai

Dil waalon ko dard ki salaami

Hum be-hunaron ki zee'st pal bhar

Iqbal ki zindagi...... Dawaami !!!

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muhtarma amra . ap ki mokhtlif posts parne ka itifaq hoa. ap ka zoq mashallah kya khob he. ye silsila ap ka sb se bemisal he

mera hisa....

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Mohtaram hazrat ,

Parveen shakir ka kalam mujhe hamesha se apne dilke qareeb bhi laga aur hasb e haal bhi , meri pasandeeda sahyera ke kalam ko jis tarz se ap ne sajaya hei vo apke asthetic senses ko highlight kar raha hai itne khubsoorat mahol mein itne haseen lafz .........wah......

aaj bhi voi hoa ke 'guzar gayee shab micl e mauj e saba' aur aise mein subhu to ho gayee gu ujala ab subhu ke sath nahi ugg pata magar kher in tehreeron ne acha sath diya ratjage mein .........

khaas kar ye nazm itni baar parhee ke azbar ho gayee magar ji nahi bhara

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Thanx hazaroun gulistan for posting these gems in such mesmerizing style....

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Dilke bauhat qareeb eik nazm.......

~*Shart*~

tera kehna hai...

"mujh ko Khaliq-e-kon-o-makaan ne

kitni dheron naimatein dee hain

meri aankhon mein gehri shaam ka daaman kushaan jadoo

meri baaton mein ujle mausamon ki gul fishaan khushboo

mere lehje ki garmi mauja-e-gul ne tarashi hai

mere alfaz per qaus-e-qazah ki rang paashi hai

mere honton mein daisy ke gulabi phool ki rangat

mere rukhsaar per gulnaar shaamon ki jawan hiddat

mere haathon mein pankharion ki shabnam lams narmi hai

mere baalon mein barsaaton ki raatein apna rasta bhool jaati hain

mein jab dheeme surron mein geet gaati hoon

tu sahil ki hawaein

adh khule honton mein, piyase geet leker

saaya-e-gul mein samat kar baith jati hain

mera fun soch ko tasveer deta hai

mein hurfon ko naya chehra

tu chehron ko huroof nau ka rishta nazar karti hoon

zaban takhleeq karti hoon "

tera kehna mujhe tasleem hai

mein maanti hoon

us ne meri zaat ko behad nawaza hai

Khuda-e-barg-o-gul ke saamne

mein bhi dua mein hoon, sarapa-e-shukar hoon

us ne mujhe itna bohot kuch dedia...

lekin

tujhe de de tu mein jaanoon!

Edited by Amra

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kitni pyaree se mukhtacar see nazm kitini ajeeb tavaquh............muskura diya dil eikdum...............kash koi parveen shakir ko batlaye ke guzri baatain koi bhula ho to yaad ayen .......kuch lamhe to dil pe ruh pe aise naqsh bana dete hein ke waqt ki gard mein at he nahi sakte.....yad vo kiya jata hai jo bhul jaye insaan........

kher

ye ghazal ............iska hur sher..........................dilke ander basa hoa aur dilke behud nazdeek bhi ...........kabhi lab muskura dete hein in ashaar ko parhte samaiy kabhi palken bheeg jatee hien ........ajub qalam parveen shakir ka bhi......

chehra mera tha nighain thee uski

khamoshi mein bhi vo baatain uski

mere chehre pe ghazal likhtee gayeen

sher kehtee hoee ankhain uski

shokh lamhon ka pata dene lageen

tez hotee hoee sansain uski

aise mausam bhi guzare hum ne

subhein jab apni theen shamain uski

dhiyaan mein uske ye alam tha kabhi

ankh mahtaab ki yaadain uski

faisla mauj e hava ne likha

andhiyaan meri baharain uski

neend is soch se tuti akcar

kiss tarha kattee hein raatain uski

aur hacil e ghazal sher , dil o jaan qurban jis pe meri..........

dur reh kar bhi sada rehtee hein

mujh ko thaame hoay baahain uski

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.....ajeeb dor yad dila dia ap ne amra...wo dor e wisaal....koi kese lafz de us ko..kaise yad kare..kaise bhula de........ek sher yad aa gaya apna...

Hasil e umr e rawan lamhe the us ke wasl ke

Umr bhar ke wastey jo de gaya furqat mujhe....

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Hasil e umr e rawan lamhe the us ke wasl ke

Umr bhar ke wastey jo de gaya furqat mujhe....

eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska

vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka

hur eik ko apna haal sunaanae se faida

mera jo hamkhayal tha vaapis na asaka

mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa

kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka

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mohtarama baat to sabhi ehsaasat ki hoa karte hei , aur ye nazmain ghazlain hein he aisi ke hur hasas dilko chu ke guzrain

aap jaise sathyon ka qurb haacil hoa to yahan post karne pe dil mayal hoa

acha lagta hai aise hasas logon ke qurb mein .......

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shadeed dokh tha agar chy tery judaai ka

siwa hai ranj hamain teri bewafaai ka

tojhay bhi zoaq nai tajribat ka ho ga

hamin bhi shoaq tha kuch baghkt azmaai ka

millay tu aisay rag-e-jan ko jaisay choo aye

juda howay tu wohi karb na-rasaai ka

koi sawal jo poochay tu kia kahon os say

bicharnay walay sabab tu bata judaai ka

na de saka koi tabeer khwab tu bakhshay

main ehteram karon gee teri baraai ka

PARVEEN SHAKIR

Meri pasndeedah ghazlon mein hai, shukria.

Ek sher:

Khushboo kahin na jay-e yeh israar hai bahot,

Aur yeh bhi Arzoo ke Zaara zulf Kholiy-e.

A wonderful sher indeed depicting the dilemma of males.

Yet this uncertainity is required in life.

This is the worth of a beloved and at the same time the sense of posssession and apprehension to loose that.

wassalam

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Amra salam,

12 baj ker tetis min. apr 10th, 2009

bilkul ek saal pehlay, Perween Shakir kay naam ka lagaya hova, aap ka ye poda, ek tanAwer shajar ki soorat, apnay sab gulon aur kallion samait, aap ko mubarki deta hai.

aap jaha kaheen bhi hain, hamari janib say mubarakh baad qobool karain.

aap ki taraf say shoroo kerda es silsilay ka dil say shukria.

ws

Edited by khakay batool

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khaak ho jaain gain qatil bhi yahan taiq ba-dast

aur ghaltida ba-khon bhi nahi rehnay walay

neem bismil hi sahi hain tu mayassir tujh ko

phir tu ye sead e zaboo-n bhi nahi ranay walay

waqt aisa hai k ab hashr hai kuch dair ki baat

mutma-in ehlay sokoo-n bhi nahi rehnay walay

You are doing a great job khaakay batool. Urdu sub-forum would be dead without you. It was the most happening place on ShiaChat 2/3 years ago. So many members so many good posts. I loved Urdu section. Then its glory faded way. Members left, some banned, some didn't come back like me. :) But you are doing an awesome job and I want to congratulate you for this.

Keep up the good work.

Jamay raho aur JEO, JEO!

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You are doing a great job khaakay batool. Urdu sub-forum would be dead without you. It was the most happening place on ShiaChat 2/3 years ago. So many members so many good posts. I loved Urdu section. Then its glory faded way. Members left, some banned, some didn't come back like me. :) But you are doing an awesome job and I want to congratulate you for this.

Keep up the good work.

Jamay raho aur JEO, JEO!

salam,

thank you so much Marbles. it is so nice of you to say these words. it touched my heart...

i know, members who can come back, should come back. i am glad you are reading it and taking part now. it is good to know that there are so many members who enjoy reading Urdu sub-forum.

reh gaiyie hum...........tu aaj hum hain kaal koi aur ho ga....khushi ye soach ker hoti hai k shayed hum bhi kisi ke zehn mien kuch daier BAQI reh sakain isi bahanay.

dua ka bohat shukria aur nawazish.

ws

Edited by khakay batool

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salam,

thank you so much Marbles. it is so nice of you to say these words. it touched my heart...

i know, members who can come back, should come back. i am glad you are reading it and taking part now. it is good to know that there are so many members who enjoy reading Urdu sub-forum.

reh gaiyie hum...........tu aaj hum hain kaal koi aur ho ga....khushi ye soach ker hoti hai k shayed hum bhi kisi ke zehn mien kuch daier BAQI reh sakain isi bahanay.

dua ka bohat shukria aur nawazish.

ws

Oh my God. dekhiye tou. main yahan per msg chorr kar chala gaya aur phir wapas aa kar check hee nahin kiya. :( My mistake. Bas kabhi kabhi hee Urdu forum kee taraf aana hota hai, kuch ash'aar parhta hoon, eik do post karta hoon aur chala jaata hoon. Baqi forums main itna masroof rehta hoon ke idher aanay ka sochta hee nahin. I know buhat ghalat baat hai ye. :squeez:

And yes you are indeed doing a great job as I said in the other thread. But I couldn't remember where I said the same to you earlier... and it was in this thread. :)

bass aap yahaan aatee rahiye aur share karti rahiye. . .takay Urdu forum per aanay walon ko kuch raunaq nazar aaye. aur jitni mehnat aur lagan se aap Urdu forum main contribute kar rahee hain aap ne mere dil main to ghar kar hee liya baqee doston ke dilon main bhi kar liya hoga. :)

Khush rahiye, sada, hamesha. . .

take care

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khaak ho jaain gain qatil bhi yahan taiq ba-dast

aur ghaltida ba-khon bhi nahi rehnay walay

neem bismil hi sahi hain tu mayassir tujh ko

phir tu ye sead e zaboo-n bhi nahi ranay walay

waqt aisa hai k ab hashr hai kuch dair ki baat

mutma-in ehlay sokoo-n bhi nahi rehnay walay

Salam KB,

Maine yeh ashaar pahle kabhee nahin parhe....

Readwan-e ka shukria.

Waise mujhe ye ashaar Ahmad Faraz saheb ke mahsoos hote hain?

Confirm karien pls.

wassalam

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salam,

aap ko kiya hota jaaa raha hai!!!!

kaisay hafiz e kalam hain Parveen kay? itnay behtereen ashaar aap nay sunay hi nahi pehlay???

hamara mashwara maniyie aur poray mehellay mien jald spray kerwa daliyie. :unsure:

ws

Koee na koee baat to zaroor hai; maein tafteesh kar ke bataoonga.

Masaib aur theiy par dil ka jaana,

Ajab ek saneha sa ho gayaa hai.

Meer saheb ne aisey hee maquon ke liye kaha tha. Kuch to hai jisne mujhe disturb kiya huva hai...

Ab dekihye Ke Parveen Shakir ke thread mein main aap se pooch raha hun ke yeh ashaar kis key hain ...

AAp ka mashwarah theek lagta hai.

Nishandehee ka shukria.

wassalam

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Salam , another good sher from her.

Bas un hua ke usne takalluf se baat kee,

Aur hum ne rote rote dupatte bhigo liye.

wassalam

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