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(salam)

Wujoode haq se yeh nizam kayam hai.

Kisi ke kais se yeh intezam qayam hai

Woh aur hoge yatimane mazhabo millat

Hamare sar pe hamara Imam (atfs) qayam hai

Ali ke naam se tufan khauf khate hai

Jinhe yaqeen nahi hai woh doob jate hai

Farishte qabr me kuch aur puchte hi nahi

Zuban pe naame ALI sunke laut jate hai

Khuda ka deen Khuda ka qalam baqi hai

Hussain tujhse Mohammad ka naam baqi hai

Mitane wale tere naam ke woh khud na rahe

Teri nasal se abhi tak imam baqi hai

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MOHSIN MERI LEHAD MEI WOH MANZAR AJEEB THA

JUB MEI NAY KHOD ALI SAY KAHA, YA ALI MADDAD

Oopsss. . .

Ye she'r Mohsin Naqvi ka nahin hai baba. Ye Shaukat Raza Shaukat ka hai. Mukammal ruba'yee kucch yoon hai:

waqt-e-nizaa' labon pe rahaa ya Ali madad

phir qabr main ye keh kar uthaa ya Ali madad

Shaukat meri lehed main wo manzar ajeeb tha

jab main ne khud Ali se kahaa ya Ali madad

Kitaab ka naam abhi zehen main nahin hai, warna likh detaa.

Wasslam

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^ Main ne Shaukat ke chappay wahid she'ri majmoo'ay main parrha hai. Yaad iss liye bhi rahaa kyun ke ye ruba'yee shaukat ne pass warq per bhi chaapee hai.

Agar Mohsin ka she'r hai to matlab shaukat ne naqal maaree.

Agar mumkin ho tou bataaiye ke ye she'r Mohsin kee kaunsee kitaab ke kaunsay varqay per hai. main dekh loongaa.

Wasslam

Edited by Jibran Haider

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Mere liye ye buhat ehem ma'aloomat hogee. zuroor bataiye gaa plz.

agar ye she'r waqa'ee Mohsin Naqvi ka hai tou kam az kam Shaukat ko pakarr tou sakoon gaa ke ye kyaa? Shan-e-Ahl-e-bait bayaan karnay main choree?. . .mere nanhyaal kee taraf se rishtah daar hai.

Wasslam

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Agar copy bhee kiya to kiya houa, Zikr-e-ahlaybiat karta hai.

Waisya app ka rishteydar hai to app shayad jantay hongay kay shaukat key ziada tar saheri uskay nana key hai ?? Nadeem Sarwar nay bataya tha mujhey. I don't know kay such hai ya nahi.

Edited by MOHIB E AHLAYBAIT

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^ Zikr-e-ahl-e-bait karna aur baat hai kisi doosray ka she'r apne takkhalluss ke saath eik she'ri majmooay main chaapnaa aur baat. mere nukta nigaah se ye khayanat hai, choree hai. agar Moshin ka she'r iste'maal karna tha tou ussay quotations main rakhta aur Mohsin ka takkhaluss bhi iste'maal karta. magar uss ne apne naam ke saath chaapa. this is not right according to any standards. Agar ye sach hai to I'll surely ask him about that whenever I see him.

Us ke naana sha'yeri kartay thay. madah-e-ahl-e-bait main kafee kucch likh gaye hain., main ne unka kalam nahin parrha so kucch andaza nahin hai. Mimber se kisi ka she'r parrhnay main mazahiqa nahin jab tak ussay apne naam se naa parrha jaye. Agar shaukat ne apne nana ke ash;aar apne naam se apnee majmooay main chapay hain ya mimber se apnay naam se parrhay hain, to ye bhi choree hai aur mimber kee be-izzatee hai.

Wallahu 'Aalam

Jab tak saree baat ma'aloom na ho jaye, main kucch nahin keh sakta bhaiyya.

Bass aap mujhe Mohsin wala ye sh'er mohsin ke majmooy main confirm kar ke do. aur yaheen batana isee thread main ok

Wasslam

Edited by Jibran Haider

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Mere liye ye buhat ehem ma'aloomat hogee. zuroor bataiye gaa plz.

agar ye she'r waqa'ee Mohsin Naqvi ka hai tou kam az kam Shaukat ko pakarr tou sakoon gaa ke ye kyaa? Shan-e-Ahl-e-bait bayaan karnay main choree?. . .mere nanhyaal kee taraf se rishtah daar hai.

Wasslam

bhai jaan yay 100% mohsin naqvi ka shayr hai..aur iska shuru is tarah say hota hai...

ma'oun kay doodh say he piya ya Ali madad

mainay tou bachpanay say suna ya Ali madad

mohsin meri lahad mae wo manzar ajeeb tha

jab mainay khud Ali say kaha ya Ali madad...

kitab ka naam..mujhay yaad nahi rehtay...laikin inhi k majmooay mae parha hae.. pehlay naqvi sahab nay he yay shayr kaha tha...kaafi arsay takk jis jis nay parha unhi k naam say parha,magar phir shaukat raza nay pehla shayr change ker k akhri mae apna naam daal diya...

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Zikr-e-ahlabiat kartay hai or aqeeda sahi ho, baqi sub chlat hai :D

Naa haraam kamaaee kee khayraat kisi kaam aatee hai, naa choree kaa zikr Ahle Bayt

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Fiqh or shariyat ka masla alag, lekin ghum-e-shabbir woh shah hai jiss mei to dikhawa bhee jaiz hai. Her ibaadat ko khatam kar deta hai dikhawa siwayee ghum-e-hussain.

Imam ka qol hai kay agar rona nahi ayee to ronay jaisa moo bana loo. To me this is dikhawa, in the sense kay jo dekhay ussay nazar ayee kay ro rahey hai.

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^

Very true. This doesn't make choree jaaez, though.

Woh apna munh ronay jaisa banaaey gaa, kisi kaa maal choree naheen karey gaa

Aisey daikho, 2 ton sona kaheen say choree karr kay, Kazmain kaa tabah shuda gumbad banwaa dou, kyaa Imaam pasand karein gay?

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Fursat hoe to tum azmat ko pehchano0...

Hamaray dil say poocho azmatoon key naam mein kia hai.....

Abu Talib(a.s) Ali(a.s) Shabir(a.s) o Shabbar(a.s) Fatima(a.s) Zainab(a.s)....

Agar in ko alag kar do, to phir islam mein kia hai...

Aur jinhay bugz o taasub ney jakard rakha hai sadiyon say....

unhee logon ka kehna hai, Ali(a.s) key baap kafir thay.....

Aur isse ka naam hai bugz-e-Ali us door mein warna....

Ali(a.s) ko chord key Baqi sabhee key baap kafir thay....

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Yeah I agree with you, but zakir-e-ahlaybait hai, thora benefit of the doubt to dai, ho satka hai thora change kiya ho shair ko, ho sakta hai woh eik misra same ho baqi shair bilkol change kar diya ho.

Waisay loved your answer in that ghadder - thread

Try to get guidance from the last part of the Aayah . . .

:lol:

Edited by MOHIB E AHLAYBAIT

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Yeah I agree with you, but zakir-e-ahlaybait hai, thora benefit of the doubt to dai, ho satka hai thora change kiya ho shair ko, ho sakta hai woh eik misra same ho baqi shair bilkol change kar diya ho.

Bhaee iss silsilay mein mayn apnee pehlee guzarish mein kahaa thaa, sarqa? tawaarud? yaa khulee hayraa phayree?

Tawaarud kay m'aani hain, dou shaa'eyroun kou, lagg bhagg eik hee waqt mein, eik hee mazmoon kay lagg bhagg eik hee jaisey ash'aar waarid honaa -- yaani, alfaaz, beher aur wazn eik jais

Benefit of doubt hee tou day rahee thee . . .

Edited by Rawshni

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