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khakay batool

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  1. salam, aik tu hum etney din sey kuch fermana chah rehey hain laikin phir taal jatey hain ke koi bura na maan jaaai. aur ye baat sarey Sc readers ke liyie hai, kisi aik ke liyie nahi. baat ye hai key Bait Bazi mein ye jo manqabat aur salam ya nouhay key ashaar likhey jatey hain, hum ko un ka jawab detey hovey bohat 'koft' hoti hai aur wo yun key ye Bait Bazi ghazal ke ashaar per mabni hai nakey ''Bait Bazi e manqabat o salam'' !!! tu yun jawaban, salam ya nouhay key ashaar munasib nahi lagtey!! hum bohat din se ye baat sab se poochna chah rehey they ke aya aisa kerna theek hai aAp ki nazar mien?? agar kisi ko koi aiteraaz nahi hai tu phir theek hi ho ga!! baraiyie meherbani apni apni raai sey zaroor nawazain. dosri baat ye ke hum ko yaad nahi aAraha hai ke aya ye shair o shairi ka silsila Moharram ki terha Mah e Ramzaan mien bhi band hojana chahiyie ya phir ye kuch din ki qaid hum sab per bhi lagoo ho gee??? :) Mah e Ramzaan Mubarak ho aAp sab ko. eltimas e duaa ws
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  3. Qassim sab, ye sab tu bohat umda kalam hai aAp ka. kitab nahi kitabain chap sakti hain aisey kalam per tu. phir dier kioun!! aur khas tor sey kai maqtey bohat umda hain aAp ki ghazlon key. bohat bohat daad hazir hai.. Allah aAp ko jaza e khair ataa karey key apney alfaaz ko zikr e Mohammad o Alay Mohammad (pbuh) key noor sey ujala aAp ney. ws
  4. SubhanAllah bohat umda rubaii hai. 'usey tu dil ki lughat mien Hussain kehtey hain' Wah
  5. salam, bohat khoob janab.. lagta hai aAp ka majmoa'n e kalam zaroor chap choka hai. hum zaroor padhna chahain gain. aur kuch sunaiyie apney kalam mien se... ws
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  7. یہ ناممکن کہ ہو تیرا ستم مجھ سے عیاں کوئ وہاں فریاد کرتا ہوں نہیں ہوتا جہاں کوئ
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  9. LOL, tu us manqabat mien YA' se koi shair ho tu sunaaiyie aur baqi manqabat alag thread mien likhiyie. ws
  10. salam, abhi aik nazar aur dali aAp ki manqabat per tu aik tuk bandi ho gaiyie.. arz hai... ÀÇŸ!ÏÔãä öÍیÏÑ ˜æ Ȫی ˜ÀäÇ یÀ šÇ Àÿ ÍیÏÑ ˜æ ÈäÇیÇ یÇ ãæáÇ ãیÑÿ Âÿ umeed hai aAp eslah fermaingey. shukriya ws
  11. wesey sayedzeeshan, agar aAp likhney hi lagey tu 'takhallus' kiya ho ga aAp ka??
  12. salam, acha tu hai. kam az kam 5 ashaar aur likhney ki koshish karain phir kuch pata chal sakta hai. ws
  13. Wah! bohat khoob.. hum soch rehey hain key apney deewan ka thread aAp kab shoroo karaingay? shair hazir hai.. یا علی! تیرا حسیں نام بھلا لگتا ہے تیری نسبت سے یہ اسلام بھلا لگتا ہے لوگ کہتے ترے عشق میں پاگل مجھ کو اور مرے دل کو یہ الزام بھلا لگتا ہے
  14. [q salam, aAp key mufassal jawab ka behad shukriya. aAp ney likha key ''sirf mauzuu hai jo tey karey ga key aAp ney manqabat kahi hai ....'' baraai mererbani ye bataain key salam aur manqabat mien kiya ferq hai? aAp ney abhi tak aik beher ki micaal dee.......aur kitni bahoor hain? aAp sawal ka entezar na karain, bas batatey chalay jaain key shair kehney key kiya usool hain. aAp ney inshaAllah jee ko likha key aik shair mien 84 technical ghaltiyan ho sakti hain!! sab sey ziyada honey wali chand aik ghaltiyan tu kafi wazeh hain, laikin phir bhi, umeed hai aAp es per bhi kuch tabcira fermaingey. agar beher fix ho bhi jaai aur phir alfaaz hi na milain tu es sahoolat key liyie kin kin shua'ra sey mustafeed ho saktey hain??? :) ye sawal youn kiya gaya key ye aik bohat ghambeer masala hai aAjkal key ''noumashq angraizDan'' shua'ra key liyie! aAp ka mufeed mashwara????? es forum mien ziyada log guftagoo mien hissa nahi laitey laikin padhtey khoob hain. es liyie aAp ye mat sochiyie ga key aAp ki mehnat raAiga'n ja rahi hai. ahista ahista aur log bhi shamil hotey jaain gain inshaAllah. hum bohat shukrguzaar hain aAp key, key aAp etna mufeed mawad es forum key liyie derj ker rehey hain. ws
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  19. salam, hum ko hergiz yaqeen nahi aAraha hai key aAp jaisay koi shair' etna waqt nikaal ker etna kuch seekha den gain!!! aAp yaqeen karen key aAp ko bohat lutf ayie ga SC per es terha elm e urooz seekhanay mien. aur aAp key tawassut sey hum sab bhi kafi kuch seekh jaain gain. aAp ko duaain den gain aur aAp jitna hum ko seekhaain gay, khud aAp ka elm bhi aur ziyada badhta rehey ga..inshaAllah. (ye tu hamarey Maula(as) ka qol bhi hai) ye tu aik behr hovi baqi bataain... qafiya aur radeef samajh mien aAgaya laikin hum ney dekha hai key kaai mashoor shuara bhi ab es ka khayal nahi rakhtey. yani, radeef tu hoti hai qafiya nahi hota. ye kon C jiddat hai? kiya ye shairi key usoolon key khilaaf nahi? kiya ye ghazal hi kehlaai gee? hum bejhijak, bewaqoofi key sawalaat tu karen gain hi laikin aAp sey umeed hai key derguzar aur berdasht sey jawab bhi den gain. aAp ka bohat shukriya key aAp ney bohat achey waqt SC join kiya. SC per khush Amdeed! ws
  20. SALAM, hamari janib se dunya bhar key musalmano, aur bilkhusoos ShiaChat' ke padhney walon ko, IMAM ZAMANA (as) KI WILADAT PER DILLY MUBARAKH BAD... hamari dua hai ke Perwerdegar hum sab ko MOHAMMAD O ALAY MOHAMMAD (pbuh) Ke saath mehshoor karey. aAp sab es saal sehat aur khairiyat se rehen aur gham e Hussain ke siva koi gham na dekhen. Ameen Perwerdegar, sadqey se Alay Mohammad ke hamarey MuLuK ko hamaisha dushman ki nigah aur Awam ki Hubbul Watani se mehfooz rakhey.Aur 'Paki-Zadgaan' per apna khaas lutf o karam aur rehmatain nazil karey. Elahi ameen.. umeed hai aAp sab ki SHAB E BARAT, EBADAT mie guzri ho gi nakay patakhon aur halva pori mien!!!! Duaoon mien yaad rakhiyie ga zaroor.. ws
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  22. salam, sach batain ye Allama Iqbal ka hai?? apney Allama Iqbal? ''shikwa'' aur ''jawab e shikwa'' waley? ws
  23. صورت کے آئینہ میں دل پائمال دیکھ الفت کی واردات کا حسن جمال دیکھ جب اُس کا نام آئے کسی کی زبان پر ِاُس وقت غور سے میرے چہرے کا حال دیکھ :unsure: :!!!: :dry: :huh: :o :( :cry: :angel: :blush: :P!!!!!!!
  24. Nao tu bach gai laikin aAp phans gaiyien janab! ye 'HA' Halwey wali nahi Hathi wali hai. laikin chonkey Mahe Mubarak e Shaban shoroo ho chuka hai es liyie halwey wali HA ka zehn mien aAna bhi kuch aisa bora nahi! ws
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