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In the Name of God بسم الله

khakay batool

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  1. thank you sharib, Aap k ye chand alfaz hameshan mera hosla barhatay rahain gay. Aap nay bohat khoobsoorat likha hai. har shair mokammal fikr rakhta hai. mind mat kijiay ga agar ye zameen phir nazar aayee!!!! wasey, naqshipa, agar aap bura na manay tu phelay shair ka doosra misra dekh lain zara. " bohat kathan tha ye, per jhailna para mujh ko" es main say "YE" aur "per" ki jagha "MAGAR" laga kar dekhiay!!! wasay aap behtar samajhtay hain best wishes
  2. kash ammi hi hoteen!!!! laikin, ab shayed aisa kabhi na ho sakay- ap nay bhi kia yad dila dia.
  3. nai bhi ab itni bhi sangeen nahi hai. main tu yeh samajhna chah rahi thi k kia main bhi "shayiree" kar sakti hon ya nahi. laikin "een saadat ba zoray bazo neest" ta na bukhshad Khuday bakhshanda wasay kia jata jo aap bhi beloved ki thori himmat afzai kartay, aur ghazal poori honay detay. ye honar bhi sab main kahan hota hai!!!!!! :)
  4. gur bur jo beloved nay ki naqshipa say aaj ajab alam say qalam rokna para much ko!!!!!
  5. bohat khoob, wah wah wah bhi. mushaira loot lia aap nay. yeh tu boohat "Jammi" hoi shaayree hai aap ki. mashallah say. pehla misra hi bohat jan liwa hai. umeed hai aap apni shaayree aata kartay rahain gay!!! dua go
  6. beautiful nazrana ! pls share more of your work.
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