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In the Name of God بسم الله

naqshipa

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  1. ajeeb tarha se haunt kar rahi hei aap ke yeh tehreer aur is ka ehsaas....
  2. neeche do nazmein paish karne ja raha hoon, go k andesha yeh hai k yeh dono bhi meri guzishta tehreer "Talaash e wafa" ki tarha aap ehbab ki beniyazi ki nazr ho jayein gi...magar phir bhi aik mohoom si umeed ke sath hazir kar raha hoon.. aik dost ne mere mehboob ka taaruf maanga tha...pehli nazm mein usey alfaz dene ki koshish ki hai.. doosri nazm mein usi mehboob ke liye dua hai...woh bhi sath dene ko dil kiya khush rahein Naqshipa
  3. in dilchasp ghalatiyon ki mazrat chahta hon.. yeh lijiye naya link.. http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/1279/sharibxm2.jpg
  4. aik bilkul taza ghazal aap sab ke zoq e sher ki nazr... Naqshipa
  5. khakay batool aur amra aap donon ki in posts ko parh ke jane kyon apni aik ghazal yad aa gai.. sunata chaloon.....
  6. aap ke hukm ki tameel mein zara si takheer ho gai jis ke liye mazrat chahta hon..darasl shehr se bahar tha guzishta dinon so majboor tha aap ke kalam ko urdu rasmaulkhat mein likh to laya hon......agar imla ki koi ghalati ho ya deegar koi tabdeel chahate hoon to bejhijhak bataiye ga ye lijiye link...isye apni ghazal ke sath he ooper de dijiye.. http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/5655/sharibrc8.jpg wsalam naqshipa
  7. ''Ek bachhe kee sadah hansi jaise suraj kee pahlee kiran'' wah sharib saheb bohat umda kalam...kya khoob bahao hei dad pesh hei
  8. Mohtarma jahan tak insan ke ikhtiyar ki baat hai to sach kaha aap ne kuch hudood hein us ki us ke aagey bas khuda he ke hath hota hai her muamla.......isi tanazur mein aap ki nazm ne bhi ajeeb tarha se jakar liya ehsaas ko...bohat acha laga is ki aik aik satr ko parhna..mehsoos karna... laikin.......main yeh samajhta hoon k ikhtiyarat ki is had ke ander bhi hum log amooman bohat kuch karne ki ehliyat rakhte hote hein lekin khud ko hudood ka paband samajh ke woh sab bhi nahin kar paatey........hum wafa ko bhi aik dayere mein qaid kar lete hein.,..us dayere mein k jo hum ne apne majbooriyon ki wajha se us ke gird lagya hota hai....laikin haqeeqat yeh hai k hum her muamle mein itney majboor hote bhi nahin......per hamein ehsas nahin ho pata k hum wafa ko usi limit mein rakhne ke aadi ho chuke hote hein..........warna chand bebak iqdamaat boht si naam-nehaad majbooryon ko pairon tale masal sakte hein......log to aaj ke dor mein rabta karne ko bhi pahaar jitna mushkil kam samajhte hein jab k aaj kal aik school going chota bacha bhi apne contacts se khudmukhtari ke sath das waseelon se rabte ka ehal ho gaya hai ........jane yeh sab mein kyon keh raha hon....shayed mere ander bhi bohat kuch hei.......jo unkaha ...unsuna reh gaya hei.....bohat se sawal....bohat si shikaytein....bohat se doubts...........per yeh sab aap se kyon keh diya ...nahin janta....shayed tazkira aisa chal nikla..........muaf kijiye ga agar kuch gran guzra ho rto nazm ki kaifiat abhi tak tari hei...wah
  9. .............yeh mehz sher nahin do muhabbat krne dilon ka mazhab dikhai detye hei kya is mazhab ke log abhi bhi zinda hein is zameen per....kya yeh mazhab aaj bhi mana jata hei!!
  10. .....ajeeb dor yad dila dia ap ne amra...wo dor e wisaal....koi kese lafz de us ko..kaise yad kare..kaise bhula de........ek sher yad aa gaya apna... Hasil e umr e rawan lamhe the us ke wasl ke Umr bhar ke wastey jo de gaya furqat mujhe....
  11. ek myaoosi ek wehshat hei is geet ke bolon mein bhi aur dhun mei bhi isey sunte sunte mayooi sirayat kar jati hei ander to wehshat lawey parti hei ankhon ke raste shyed esa he hua ap ke sath amra
  12. parveen shakir ka jo sher mein ne likha jese us ki mukamal wazahat ker di ho ap ki nazm ne ehsas pe halib a gayin ye satrein.... ek sher..
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