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(salam)

Jibran Haider Posted Yesterday, 10:39 PM

acha please koi Allah ka baNda ye to bataiye ke ye Urdu font maiN itnay ache ache ashaar kiss tarah likhte haiN. maiN to romanised Urdu likh likh kar tung hee aagaya hooN. khaas taur per sher likhte huye to urdu zabaan ka hulyaa hee bigar jaata hai. ghaliban net per ye hee ghaneemat hai

Bilkul jibran bhai theek keh rahay hain..........plz help out here :)

Allah Hafiz

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^LOL.

By the way, where was Khusro from?

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Mukhtalif revyaat hain, some say he was from Toba Tek Singh, others say from Chichwatni, and still other Timbuctu, Allahu 'Aalam

Faarus ke hongay..shidam shud se yehi lag raha hai..

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Maan saddqay! :dry:

Farsi sh'aaeree kee jaan kay saath yeh sulook koye dil waala hee karr sakkta thaa

wahh. insaan bhi "ooper kee cheezoN" ko dekh kar kyaa khub andazay lagaa leta hai :huh:

Ameer khusro dehlavi naam tha unka. unheN tootee-e-Hind bhi kehtay haiN. walid Turkey se migrate kar ke hindustan aye thay. Khusro kee paidaish Delhi maiN huyee, magar baaz rawayaat ke mutabiq Delhi ke bahar huyee. (magar Delhi ke aaspaas hee huyee, so zyaada pareshaani kee baat nahi)

aaj kee zabaan maiN unhen aap Turkish-Indian ya phir Indian-Turkish keh sakte haiN. ehem baat ye hai ke unkee wafaat ke baad unke vurasaa ne unke jasd-e-khaakee ko wapas Turkey le ja kar nahi dafnaaya. iske bar-aks wo Delhi maiN hee dafan kiye gaye.

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Haan Peer, eik revayat yeh ^ bhee hai

(salam)

Bilkul jibran bhai theek keh rahay hain..........plz help out here :)

Allah Hafiz

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Urdu mein typnay kay liye neechay diye gaye link say chotaa saa software download karrnaa parrtaa hai . . .

http://www.unipad.org/download/

. . . aur, sis zainabia kou duaaon mein yaad rakhein jinhoun nay yeh link diya huwa hai . . . mazeed tafseelat chaahiyein houn iss software baaray mein tou yeh thread daikhein

http://www.shiachat.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=14855

enjoy!

Edited by Rawshni

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Meer Taqi Meer

زنداں میں بھی شورش نہ گئ اپنے جنوں کی

اب سنگ مداوا ھے اس آشفتہ سری کا

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Farsi sh'aaeree kee jaan kay saath yeh sulook koye dil waala hee karr sakkta thaa

Kya kahun??

Chorein..

Meer says:

Baatein humari yaad rahein phir baatein na aisi suniyay ga,

Parhtay jo kisi ko suniyay ga tou der talak sar dhuniyay ga.

Edit: Shayr kuch misspell hua tha.

Edited by Friend of All

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Ohh acha.. I thought he was from Saraiki, Sindh-Punjab area.

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:D

Ameer Khusro aur seraiki, sindh-punjab area se? na jee na na. door door tak isska imkaan nahi. ooper dee gayee buhat see "mukhtalif rawayaat" tak maiN bhi iss ka ehtamaal nahi. haan "Cheecha watni" kuch nazdeek hai magar Multan (seraiki patte ka baqaida aaghaaz) se kuch door hee hai.

Seraiki area kee jaan to Khwaja Ghulam Farid haiN. albatta unhoN ne Farsi (samet 7 zabaano) maiN bhi taba' aazmayee kee thee, magar unki pehchan unki seraiki mahaarat hai.

yooN hee bina bar tazkaara keh gaya.

seraiki ka naam le kar aap ne mere dil ke taar cheR diye, aur jab seraiki ka naam aata hai Farid yaad atay haiN, nateejatan ab unke kuch ash'aar suniye jo mujhe yaad reh gaye:

Khwaja Ghulaam Farid kee eik Seraiki kaafi se char misray suniye ga:

تتی تھی جوگن چو دھار پھراں

ہند سنرھ پنجاب تے ماڑ پھراں

سنج بار تے شہر با زار پھراں

متاں یار مِلم کہیں سانگ سبب

aur inhee kee eik urdu ghazal ke 2 sher yaad aarahe haiN:

یہ بیتابی، یہ بے خوابی، یہ بے چینی، کہ ہے مجھ پر

اسی حالت میں دلبر کا گزر ہو وے تو کیا ہو وے

اُس اِک خور شید رُو کے نور کے فیضا ں سے ہم دم

شبِ تیرہ مری رشکِ سحر ہو وے تو کیا ہو وے

doosree ghazal maiN farmatay haiN:

مے پرستی میں مرے دل کی تر قّی دیکھو

خمِ گر دُوں کو اد نیٰ سا پیا لہ سمجھا

bardaasht karnay ka shukriya :)

Edited by Jibran Haider

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Oh acha. Mujhe kuch ziada nahi pata Ameer Khusro kay baray me. Thanks for your help.

Wa'Salam

Ali

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As a matter of fact, Jibran is right . . .

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alrite then, care to share what's in your signature? :P

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aaye aaye,

well jee, ye mere mamdooH Khwaaja Ghulam Farid ka sher hai, of course, Seraiki maiN:

اتھ میں مٹھڑی نت جاں بلب

او تاں خوش وسدا وچ ملک عرب

markazi khayaal iska ye hai ke:

yahaN maiN becharee ghamzadaa (yaad kee sabab) marnay ke qareeb hooN

aur wo (mera mehboob Rasool) to mulk-e-Arab maiN khushee se bass raha hai.

The beauteousness and mellifluousness of the original verse can never ever be sensed in a language other than the one in which 'twas written.

Shukriya :)

Edited by Jibran Haider

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غزا لاں تم تو واقف ہو کہو مجنوں کے مرنے کی

دوانہ مر تو گیا آخر کو ویرانے پہ کیا گزری ؟

(رام نرا یٔن موزُوں)

Note: I've relied on my memory and posted this couplet. If someone finds an error, please correct it

Note: "Misra-e-saani maiN agar hum دوانہ ko دیوانہ likheN to iss se sher ke vazn maiN farq aata hai. kyuNke iss sher ki beher ka pehlay rukn ka vazn 1-2-2-2 hai aur "daal" ke baad "ye" likhnay se iska vazn 2-2-2-2 ho jayega jis se ye sher beher se kharij ho jayega. isee liye "zaroorat-e-sheri" ke tehet shu'ara asal lafz main chotee tabdeeliyaN kar dete haiN.

Salam

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(salam)

غزا لاں تم تو واقف ہو کہو مجنوں کے مرنے کی

دوانہ مر تو گیا آخر کو ویرانے پہ کیا گزری ؟

(رام نرا یٔن موزُوں)

Note: I've relied on my memory and posted this couplet. If someone finds an error, please correct it

Note: "Misra-e-saani maiN agar hum دوانہ ko دیوانہ likheN to iss se sher ke vazn maiN farq aata hai. kyuNke iss sher ki beher ka pehlay rukn ka vazn 1-2-2-2 hai aur "daal" ke baad "ye" likhnay se iska vazn 2-2-2-2 ho jayega jis se ye sher beher se kharij ho jayega. isee liye "zaroorat-e-sheri" ke tehet shu'ara asal lafz main chotee tabdeeliyaN kar dete haiN.

Salam

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Sunntay aaye hain keh yeh sh'eyr Raja Raam Narayan Mauzoon nay Nawab Siraujudaulah kay Plassey mayn maaray jaanay peh kahaa thaa . . .

Iss tanaazur main agar iss kay alfaaz kee nashist o barkhaast kou daikhaa jaaey;

ghazalaan, majnoon, divanah, weeraanah teh-dar-dar m'aanee miltay hain . . .

By the way, mayn nay issay "Divanah tou marr gyaa hogaa, weeraanay peh kyaa guzree" parhrhaa hai . . . wazan waghairah kaa waqoof mujhay bilkul naheen hai . . . lehaazah . . .

Thanks for sharing

(salam)

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(salam)

Sunntay aaye hain keh yeh sh'eyr Raja Raam Narayan Mauzoon nay Nawab Siraujudaulah kay Plassey mayn maaray jaanay peh kahaa thaa . . .

Iss tanaazur main agar iss kay alfaaz kee nashist o barkhaast kou daikhaa jaaey;

ghazalaan, majnoon, divanah, weeraanah teh-dar-dar m'aanee miltay hain . . .

jee haan aisa hee hai. iss sher kee wajah tehreer issay mazeed baa-maani aur khubsoorat banaa detee hai.

By the way, mayn nay issay "Divanah tou marr gyaa hogaa, weeraanay peh kyaa guzree" parhrhaa hai . . . wazan waghairah kaa waqoof mujhay bilkul naheen hai . . . lehaazah . . .

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MaiN khud misra-e-saani ke pehle alfaaz baray tazbazab ka shikaar tha laikin iss sher kee beher kee madad se alfaaz yaad karnay maiN aasaani huyee. jahaN tak "divana tou mar gayaa hoga" ka talluq hai, meri adnaa raye ke mutabiq iss beher ke rukn مفا عیلُن per ye beth nahi rahaa shayed ko ehl-e-ilm kisi soorat bithaa de.

Wallahu aalam

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Agha jaan nay hamari pedaish per kaha tha:

Hazaro'n Saal Nargis Apni be-Noori Pay Roti Hay

Bari Mushkil Say Hota Hay Chaman Me Dedawar Paida

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Agha jaan ne ye nahi bataaya "nargis" kaun hai? :unsure:

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Agha jaan ne ye nahi bataaya "nargis" kaun hai? :unsure:

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LOL.

Aapka dosra shair parh kar aik shair zehn me aya:

Ajab Sulagti Hui Lakrian Hain Yeh Rishtedar Bhi

Duur Rahein to Dhuwan Dein, Qareeb Ayein to Jalnay Lagein

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