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[Marbles]

Aaiye dosto. . .Ghalib, Faiz aur Sahir ke saath saat Iqbal ko bhi saath liye chaleN. . . Jiss per pehlay eik thread banaa magar haalaat kee nazar ho gayaa. . .

Aaj maiN iss thread ka Iqbal kee eik nazm se aaghaaz karta hooN jo mujhe buhat pasand hai. . aur aap sab ko da'awat detaa hooN ke Allamah Iqbal ke kalaam se pasandeedah ash'aar, ghazleN, nazmen chun chun chun aur chun kar yahaaN postiye. . .

achay achay mazaameen, Iqbal kee hayaat per, falsafay per, nazriyaat per aur saaf zaahir hai, shay'eri per, bhi hasb-e-taufeeq post'tay rahiye. . . aur haaN. . .zehen  maiN rahe ke yahaaN Iqbal per tanqeed maqsood hai, bechaaray ke be-izzatee nahiN. . .

Aap ka buhat shukriya

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Edited by Jibran Haider, 19 July 2006 - 07:05 PM.

[Marbles]

Eik buhat khubsoorat sh'er

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[Sadqain]

Nahi tera Nasheman Qasar-e-Sultani kay Gumbad par
Tu Shaheen hai Basaira Kar Paharon ki Chaton par

Nahi Mera Nasheman Shiachat ki Threads main
Main Sadqain hoon besaira karon ga jahan mera dil chahay

[Abbas_Zaidi]

Jibran bhai,
i am sure your ardent partner in urdu poetry Rawshni will not contribute to this post....

[al-syedia]

why???
is she on vacatioN>??

[Aasee]

Sadqain, on Jul 20 2006, 03:16 AM, said:

Nahi tera Nasheman Qasar-e-Sultani kay Gumbad par
Tu Shaheen hai Basaira Kar Paharon ki Chaton par

Yeh
'Khalifa #2 kay liye kaha gya tha?

[Ishk-e-Zahra]

Jibran Haider, on Jul 20 2006, 04:00 AM, said:

Aaiye dosto. . .Ghalib, Faiz aur Sahir ke saath saat Iqbal ko bhi saath liye chaleN. .

zaroor achee baat hae..

bazoo pae bharoosa hae tou insaaf na mangou
iss doure mae pachtaou gay zanjeer hila ker...

[miqdadnaqvi]

Aasee, on Jul 20 2006, 12:11 AM, said:

Yeh
'Khalifa #2 kay liye kaha gya tha?

ghulat bilkul ghalat woh shaheen nahi kargus tha.

and, Kargus kaa jahan aur hai shaheen ka jaha'n aur.....

[Saahir]

ÚÇÞÈÊ ãäÒá ãÇ æÇÏی ÎÇãæÔÇä ÇÓÊ
ÍÇáیÇ ÛáÛáÀ ÏÑ äÈÏ ÇÝáǘ ÇäÏÇÒ

(yahaaN se guzartay huay aik sha'r yaad aaya...)

Edited by Saahir, 20 July 2006 - 11:21 AM.

[Rawshni]

miqdadnaqvi, on Jul 20 2006, 11:47 AM, said:

ghulat bilkul ghalat woh shaheen nahi kargus tha.

and, Kargus kaa jahan aur hai shaheen ka jaha'n aur.....

Shaheen bhee koyee muqaddas cheez naheen hai, taareekh gwaah hai, puraanay roomiyoun say lay karr aaj takk, saamraajyoun aur fascistoun kaa nishaan rahaa hai, aaj bhee amreeka kaa nishaan hai . . . Sheikh Sahab nay usay lionize kiya tou iss wajeh say naa uss ke mahiyyat badlee, naa hee Sheikh Sahab kaa kisee cheez kou pasand karrnaa hujjat hai kisee aur parr

Edited by Rawshni, 20 July 2006 - 12:08 PM.

[Marbles]

Abbas_Zaidi, on Jul 20 2006, 04:16 AM, said:

Jibran bhai,
i am sure your ardent partner in urdu poetry Rawshni will not contribute to this post....

Dekhiye jee. . .kya kartee haiN behnaa. . .waisay abhi kuch farmaaya to hai unhoN ne. . .

al-syedia, on Jul 20 2006, 04:26 AM, said:

why???
is she on vacatioN>??

hmm. . .acchaa sawaal hai

Aasee, on Jul 20 2006, 06:11 AM, said:

Yeh
'Khalifa #2 kay liye kaha gya tha?

koi wajah?

Rawshni, on Jul 20 2006, 06:06 PM, said:

Shaheen bhee koyee muqaddas cheez naheen hai, taareekh gwaah hai, puraanay roomiyoun say lay karr aaj takk, saamraajyoun aur fascistoun kaa nishaan rahaa hai, aaj bhee amreeka kaa nishaan hai . . . Sheikh Sahab nay usay lionize kiya tou iss wajeh say naa uss ke mahiyyat badlee, naa hee Sheikh Sahab kaa kisee cheez kou pasand karrnaa hujjat hai kisee aur parr

Jis context maiN Shaheen kee tashbeeh iste'maal kee gayee hai, ussay usee maiN rakh kar dekhnay se hee Iqbal ke kalaam maiN shaheen ka kaam samajh maiN aa sakta hai. . .wagarna yooN to Maula Ali ko officially sher-e-khuda declare kar ke bhi sheroN ko koi mazhabi taqqaddus nahiN milaa aur na hee logoN ke diloN maiN sheroN ka khauf aur dar, muhabbat aur aqeedat maiN badlaa. . .

Saahir, on Jul 20 2006, 05:12 PM, said:

عاقبت منزل ما وادی خاموشان است
حالیا غلغلہ در گنبد افلاک انداز

(yahaaN se guzartay huay aik sha'r yaad aaya...)

^ Ab saaf nazar aa raha hai. . .Farsi Iqbal kee bunyaad daalnay ka shukria janaab. buhat khoob!

Edited by Jibran Haider, 20 July 2006 - 06:55 PM.

[Marbles]

Abdul something Siddiqi ne Iqbal ka Farsi she'r Urdu maiN buhat hee khubsoortee aur kaamyaabi se dhaala hai. . .dekhiye:

ÈäÏÀٔ ÒÑ ÎæÏ ˜æ Êæ یãÇäÀٔ ÒÑ Óÿ äÀ äǁ
ÒÑ ÊÑی ǁäی äÙÑ ˜ÿ ÒÇæیۓ Óÿ ÒÑ ÀæÇ

ÝÇÑÓی Óÿ ÇÑÏæ

[kaneez e mehdi]

zahir ki ankh say na tamasha karay koi
gar dekhna ho deeda e dil wa karay koi

[sayedzeeshan]

^^ Yeh to "meer dard" ka nahin?

Mujhey Ayatollah Khamenai ki Allama Iqbal par bari achchi kitaab milli hai , soocha share kar loon: Iqbal: The Poet Philosopher of Islamic Resurgence

[Friend of All]

One of the bestest poems by him..

Sitaaron se aage jahaan aur bhii hain
Abhii ishq ke imtihaan aur bhii hain

Tahii zindagii se nahii ye fizaayein
Yahan saikarron kaaravaan aur bhii hain

Qanaa'at na kar aalam-e-rang-o-bu par
Chaman aur bhii, aashiyaan aur bhii hain

Agar kho gayaa ek nasheman to kyaa gham
Maqaamaat-e-aah-o-fugaan aur bhii hain

Tu shaheen hai parwaaz hai kaam teraa
Tere saamane aasmaan aur bhii hain

Isii roz-o-shab mein ulajh kar na rah jaa
Ke tere zamaan-o-makaan aur bhii hain

Gae din ke tanhaa thaa main anjuman mein
Yahan ab mere raazadaan aur bhii hain

Edited by Friend of All, 21 July 2006 - 02:09 AM.

[Aasee]

Sadqain, on Jul 20 2006, 03:16 AM, said:

Nahi tera Nasheman Qasar-e-Sultani kay Gumbad par
Tu Shaheen hai Basaira Kar Paharon ki Chaton par

Aasee, on Jul 20 2006, 05:11 AM, said:

Yeh
'Khalifa #2 kay liye kaha gya tha?

Jibran Haider, on Jul 20 2006, 11:29 PM, said:

koi wajah?

Mosuf paharroun peh basera karrnay mein kafi maharat rakhtay thay. Hawalay kay liye Uhad ka haal parhrheay

[Ishk-e-Zahra]

Aasee, on Jul 21 2006, 11:28 AM, said:

Mosuf paharroun peh basera karrnay mein kafi maharat rakhtay thay. Hawalay kay liye Uhad ka haal parhrheay

Mosuf baseraa nahee, paharouN say bhagnay mae maharat rakhtay thay...uhad kee tareekh yahee batatee hae...

[Aasee]

ISHK-E-ZEHRA, on Jul 21 2006, 09:27 AM, said:

Mosuf baseraa nahee, paharouN say bhagnay mae maharat rakhtay thay...uhad kee tareekh yahee batatee hae...

Bahi tarikh yehi bataati hai keh nosuf bhag kay paharr peh charhrha thaa, bhaga nahin tha paharr say . . .

[Saahir]

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^ Ab saaf nazar aa raha hai. . .Farsi Iqbal kee bunyaad daalnay ka shukria janaab. buhat khoob!

Thread banaanay kaa shukriya.


My fav: (FSc mein paRhay huay ash'aar jo ab tak yaad hain. )


Êæ ÑÀ äæÑÏö ÔæÞ Àÿ ãäÒá äÀ ßÑ ÞÈæáý
áíáی Ȫی ÀãäÔíŸ Àæ Êæ ãÍãá äÀ ßÑ ÞÈæáýý

Çÿ ÌæÆÿ ÂÈ Èšª ßÀ Àæ ÏÑíÇÆÿ ÊõäÏ æ ÊíÒý
ÓÇÍá Ê̪ÿ ÚØÇ Àæ Êæ ÓÇÍá äÀ ßÑ ÞÈæáýý

ÈÇØá ÏæÆی ÓäÏ Àÿ ÍÞ áÇÔÑíß Àÿý
ÔÑßÊ ãíÇäÀ ÍÞ æ ÈÇØá äÀ ßÑ ÞÈæá


Kisi ko baaqi ash'aar yaad ho tu lutfan post kare.

W/salam

Edited by Saahir, 21 July 2006 - 11:45 AM.

[Aasee]

Saahir, on Jul 21 2006, 04:41 PM, said:

Êæ ÑÀ äæÑÏö ÔæÞ Àÿ ãäÒá äÀ ßÑ ÞÈæáý
áíáی Ȫی ÀãäÔíŸ Àæ Êæ ãÍãá äÀ ßÑ ÞÈæáýý






W/salam

Khamakha ki mushkil pasandi! Manzil mil ree hai, laila mil reehai, koee baywaquf hi inkar karay ga

[Marbles]

Aasee, on Jul 21 2006, 08:28 AM, said:

Mosuf paharroun peh basera karrnay mein kafi maharat rakhtay thay. Hawalay kay liye Uhad ka haal parhrheay

Iqbal ne shaheen ko uR kar baseraa karnay ka mashawra diya tha . . .bhaag kar nahiN. . .

lehaaza itlaaq nahiN hotaa.  .

Edited by Jibran Haider, 21 July 2006 - 04:18 PM.

[Rawshni]

^

Nihayat fazool aur ghiar shaerana jawaab hai

[Marbles]

^

gher sha'yerana sawaal ka javaab bhi waisa hee honaa chahiye. . .

[Rawshni]

^

Khayr, tumm tou Ghalib kay tarafdaar hou, abb tumm say kyaa behass karoon . . .

[Marbles]

^

hum sukhan fehem hain. . . .