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[sharib]

Salam ,

Jise Ghalib ne ustad mana ho uss ke baare mein kya kaha ja sakta hai .....siwa-e iske ke usko parha aur parhwaaya jai.

Badalte zamaane ke saath Meer  kee zaban ajnabi see hotee jaa rahee hai. Azaadi ke pahle shayad is barr-e sagheer mein Meer ko Meer sajhne waale bahot theiy......abaadee to bahot badh gayee tab se magar Meer ko WAQUAEE   Meer samajhne waalon kee kamee hotee jaa rahi hai....yeh mera khayal hai ......

Jis ke baare mein Ghalib ne aitraaf kiya ho hum use kyonkar bhool sakte hain .....is liye zarooree hai ke gahe ba gaahe  aisee shaksiyaton ka zikr hota rahe ....jis se hammare SC wwale kuch "Meeri"....."Meeri" se ho jaaien "Saudai" na ho sakein.

Yeh jumla yun zehn mein aa gaya ke ghaliban Ghalib ne hee kisee shaair se poochcha ke woh kisko ustad manta hai MEER KO YA SAUDA KO ? (Meer aur Sauda ham asr theiy aur apnee apnee following rakhte theiy)..usne kaha Sauda ko ....Ghalib ne kaha ....leejiye yeh bhee"Saudaee" nikle.....

Aap hazrat( aur mastoorat) se guzarish hai ke Meer ke pas
andeedah ashaar rawaana karein.

To set the ball rolling....I contribute.....

"Sirahane Meeer ke aahista bolo
Abhee tuk rote rote so gaya hai"

(sitam zareefee yeh hai ke usee Meer Taqui Meer ke qabr ke paas se Lucknow City Station per roz shor machaatee huee railgaree guzartee hai ....)

"dard mandon se tumhee door phira karte ho kuch
poochne warna sabhee aate hain beemar ke paas"

mayoos heerahte hain beemaar mohabbat ke
is dard kee muddat tak ham ne bhee dawa kee hai

naazukee us ke lab kee kya kahiye
pankhudee ek gulaab kee see hai.


wassalam

Edited by sharib, 06 May 2010 - 01:20 PM.

[sharib]

sharib, on 06 May 2010 - 01:17 PM, said:

Salam ,

Jise Ghalib ne ustad mana ho uss ke baare mein kya kaha ja sakta hai .....siwa-e iske ke usko parha aur parhwaaya jai.

Badalte zamaane ke saath Meer  kee zaban ajnabi see hotee jaa rahee hai. Azaadi ke pahle shayad is barr-e sagheer mein Meer ko Meer sajhne waale bahot theiy......abaadee to bahot badh gayee tab se magar Meer ko WAQUAEE   Meer samajhne waalon kee kamee hotee jaa rahi hai....yeh mera khayal hai ......

Jis ke baare mein Ghalib ne aitraaf kiya ho hum use kyonkar bhool sakte hain .....is liye zarooree hai ke gahe ba gaahe  aisee shaksiyaton ka zikr hota rahe ....jis se hammare SC wwale kuch "Meeri"....."Meeri" se ho jaaien "Saudai" na ho sakein.

Yeh jumla yun zehn mein aa gaya ke ghaliban Ghalib ne hee kisee shaair se poochcha ke woh kisko ustad manta hai MEER KO YA SAUDA KO ? (Meer aur Sauda ham asr theiy aur apnee apnee following rakhte theiy)..usne kaha Sauda ko ....Ghalib ne kaha ....leejiye yeh bhee"Saudaee" nikle.....

Aap hazrat( aur mastoorat) se guzarish hai ke Meer ke pas
andeedah ashaar rawaana karein.

To set the ball rolling....I contribute.....

"Sirahane Meeer ke aahista bolo
Abhee tuk rote rote so gaya hai"

(sitam zareefee yeh hai ke usee Meer Taqui Meer ke qabr ke paas se Lucknow City Station per roz shor machaatee huee railgaree guzartee hai ....)

"dard mandon se tumhee door phira karte ho kuch
poochne warna sabhee aate hain beemar ke paas"

mayoos heerahte hain beemaar mohabbat ke
is dard kee muddat tak ham ne bhee dawa kee hai

naazukee us ke lab kee kya kahiye
pankhudee ek gulaab kee see hai.


wassalam

Salam ,

Meer ke thread mein khamoshi hamare Saudai hone ke daleel na sahi.....unkee taraf se sard muhree kee alamt to ho saktee hai...

kya yahan koee bhee Meeri nahin hai.....

Kam se kam ek /do Meer ke Sher zaroor irsaal karien ..taake yeh pata chale ke hamaare beech unke kitne ashaar circulation mein hain....

wassalam

[sharib]

Salam ,

Meer ke do sher suniye:

"Meer ji zard hote jaate ho,
Kya kahin tum ne bhee kiya hai ishq"

"Meer saheb zamaana Nazuk hai,
  Dono haathon se thamiye dastaar"

Yeh dono ashaar la-saani to hain hee la-faani bhee hain.....

aisa lagta he ke 250 baras pahle na kahe gaye hon ..aaj hee ke liye hon.

wassalam

[SHAUZEB]

salam,

Mir Taqi Mir yani k ham yad karen Urdu zuban k aik sutoon ko, aik ehad ko, shukriya sharib bhae!

sare dast aik Manqbat se khuch ashar naqal kr rhe hen:

Ìæ ãÚÊÞÏ äÀیŸ Àÿ Úáی ˜ÿ ˜ãÇ á ˜Ç
ÀÑÈÇá ÇÓ ˜ÿ Êä À Àÿ ãæ ÌÈ æ ÈÇá ˜Ç
ÚÒÊ Úáی ˜ی ÞÏÑ Úáی ˜ی ÈÀÊ Àÿ ÏæÑ
ãæÑÏ Àÿ ÐæÇáÌáÇá ˜ÿ ÚÒ æ ÌáÇ á ˜Ç
Ç یÇ Úáی ˜æ ÌÇ ˜ÿ ãÍãÏ äÿ ÇÓ ÌÀ
ÌÓ ÌÇ äÀ ÀÊÇ áÇæٔ ˜ãÇ ä æ ÎیÇá ˜Ç
Ý˜Ñ äÌÇÊ ãیÑ ˜æ ˜یÇ ¡ ãÏ Í ÎæÇ Ÿ Àÿ æÀ
ÇæáÇÏ ˜Ç Úáی ˜ی¡ ãÍãÏ ˜ی Âá ˜Ç

[sharib]

SHAUZEB, on 15 May 2010 - 02:57 PM, said:

salam,

Mir Taqi Mir yani k ham yad karen Urdu zuban k aik sutoon ko, aik ehad ko, shukriya sharib bhae!

sare dast aik Manqbat se khuch ashar naqal kr rhe hen:

Ìæ ãÚÊÞÏ äÀیŸ Àÿ Úáی ˜ÿ ˜ãÇ á ˜Ç
ÀÑÈÇá ÇÓ ˜ÿ Êä À Àÿ ãæ ÌÈ æ ÈÇá ˜Ç
ÚÒÊ Úáی ˜ی ÞÏÑ Úáی ˜ی ÈÀÊ Àÿ ÏæÑ
ãæÑÏ Àÿ ÐæÇáÌáÇá ˜ÿ ÚÒ æ ÌáÇ á ˜Ç
Ç یÇ Úáی ˜æ ÌÇ ˜ÿ ãÍãÏ äÿ ÇÓ ÌÀ
ÌÓ ÌÇ äÀ ÀÊÇ áÇæٔ ˜ãÇ ä æ ÎیÇá ˜Ç
Ý˜Ñ äÌÇÊ ãیÑ ˜æ ˜یÇ ¡ ãÏ Í ÎæÇ Ÿ Àÿ æÀ
ÇæáÇÏ ˜Ç Úáی ˜ی¡ ãÍãÏ ˜ی Âá ˜Ç

Salam ,

Wallah kya intekhab pesh kiya hai.

khush rahiye, salamat rahiye.

bahot umdah

wassalam

[Marbles]

Zabt tha jab ta'een chaahat na huyee thee zaahir
ashk ne beh kar meray chehray pe toofaan kiya

Mir.

[Marbles]

ǘ äÇæ˜ äÿ ÇÓ ˜ی ㎐ǟ ˜ÿ
ØÇÆÑ ÕÏÑÀ ʘ Ô˜ÇÑ ˜یÇ

[Syed Demanding]

áÊÿ Àæ Êæ ãä ˜æ áیÿ¡ ˜ÀÊÿ ÀیŸ ÈÀÇÑÇŸ Àÿ
ÇÊ ÀÑÿ ÀیŸ¡ ªæá ˜ªáÿ ÀیŸ¡ ˜ã ˜ã ÈÇÏ æ ÈÇÑÇŸ Àÿ

Ñä ÀæÇ Óÿ یæŸ Š˜ÿ Àÿ ÌیÓÿ ÔÑÇÈ æÇÊÿ ÀیŸ
ÿ Àæ ãÿ ÎÇäÿ ˜æ ä˜áæ¡ ÚÀÏö ÈÇÏÀ ÓÇÑÇŸ Àÿ

ÚÔÞ ˜ÿ ãیÏÇŸ ÏÇÑæŸ ãیŸ Ȫی ãÑäÿ ˜Ç Àÿ æÕÝ ÈÀÊ
یÚäی ãÕیÈÊ ÇیÓی ÇõŠªÇäÇ ˜ÇÑö ˜ÇÑ ÒÇÑÇŸ Àÿ

Ïá Àÿ ÏÇÛ¡ ÌÑ Àÿ Š˜šÿ¡ ÂäÓæ ÓÇÑÿ Îæä ÀæÆÿ
áæÀæ Çäی Çی˜ ˜Ñÿ¡ یÀ ÚÔÞ áÇáÀ ÚÐÇÑÇŸ Àÿ

˜æÀ ˜ä æ ãÌäæŸ ˜ی ÎÇØÑ ÏÔÊ æ ˜æÀ ãیŸ Àã äÀ Æÿ
ÚÔÞ ãیŸ Àã ˜æ ãیÑ äÀÇیÊ ÇÓö ÚÒøÊ ÏÇÑÇŸ Àÿ

[Marbles]

ÑÓÊÔ ˜ی یÇŸ ʘ ˜À Çÿ ÈÊ Ê̪ÿ
äÙÑ ãیŸ Ó黾٠˜ی ÎÏÇ ˜Ñ áÿ

[sharib]

Marbles, on 18 May 2010 - 04:34 PM, said:

ÑÓÊÔ ˜ی یÇŸ ʘ ˜À Çÿ ÈÊ Ê̪ÿ
äÙÑ ãیŸ Ó黾٠˜ی ÎÏÇ ˜Ñ áÿ

BAHOT HEE UMDAH ASHAAR MUNTAKHAB KIYE HAIN AAP NE.....

YEH DO SAU SAAL PURANEE GHAZAL Indian film Bazaar mein Sagar Sarhadi ne use kee thee:

"Dikhayee diye theiy ke be khud kiya
Hamein aap se hee juda kar chale:

wah wah

keep it up brother.

wassalam

[Marbles]

sharib, on 19 May 2010 - 02:28 AM, said:

BAHOT HEE UMDAH ASHAAR MUNTAKHAB KIYE HAIN AAP NE.....

YEH DO SAU SAAL PURANEE GHAZAL Indian film Bazaar mein Sagar Sarhadi ne use kee thee:

"Dikhayee diye theiy ke be khud kiya
Hamein aap se hee juda kar chale:

wah wah

keep it up brother.

wassalam

Thank you.

Indeed, this 200-years old ghazal still reverberates in the hearts and minds of the poetry lovers.

Ahl-e-bait kee shan main Mir ka eik sh'er suniye:

ÍÇÕá Àÿ ãیÑ ÏæÓÊی ÇÀá ÈیÊ ÇÑ
Êæ Ûã Àÿ ˜یÇ äÌÇÊ ˜ÿ ǁäÿ ÍÕæá ˜Ç

[sharib]

Marbles, on 19 May 2010 - 04:31 AM, said:

Thank you.

Indeed, this 200-years old ghazal still reverberates in the hearts and minds of the poetry lovers.

Ahl-e-bait kee shan main Mir ka eik sh'er suniye:

ÍÇÕá Àÿ ãیÑ ÏæÓÊی ÇÀá ÈیÊ ÇÑ
Êæ Ûã Àÿ ˜یÇ äÌÇÊ ˜ÿ ǁäÿ ÍÕæá ˜Ç

Wah,

subhan Allah.

" ai abr-e tar tu aur kisee samt ko baras
Is mulk mein hamaaree hai ,yeh chashme tar hee bas

misgan bhee bah gayeen mere  rone se chashm kee
sailab mauj mare to thar-e hai koee khas ?"

[Marbles]

sharib, on 19 May 2010 - 05:37 AM, said:

" ai abr-e tar tu aur kisee samt ko baras
Is mulk mein hamaaree hai ,yeh chashme tar hee bas

Wah! Buhat umdah. . .

Is sh'er main ibrat hai:

˜á ÇÄŸ Çی˜ ˜ÇÓÀ ÓÑ Ñ Ìæ   یÇ
ی˜ÓÑ æÀ ÇÓÊÎæÇŸ Ô˜ÓÊæŸ Óÿ æÑ ÊªÇ

[Syed Demanding]

ÊÇ ÊÇ ¡ ÈæŠÇ ÈæŠÇÍÇá ÀãÇÑÇ ÌÇäÿ Àÿ

ÌÇäÿ äÀ ÌÇäÿ á Àی äÀ ÌÇäÿ ÈÇÛ Êæ ÓÇÑÇ ÌÇäÿ Àÿ

ã̪ ˜æ ÔÇÚÑ äÀ ˜Àæ ãیÑ ˜À ÕÇÍÈ ãیŸ äÿ

ÏÑÏ æ Ûã ˜Êäÿ ˜Æÿ ÌãÚ Êæ ÏیæÇ ä ˜یÇ

äÇÒ˜ی ÇÓ ˜ی áÈ ˜ی ˜یÇ ˜Àیÿ

ä˜ªšی ǘ áÇÈ ˜ی Óی Àÿ

[Marbles]

^ Buhat khoob!

ÇÈÊÏÇ ãیŸ Àی ãÑ Æÿ ÓÈ یÇÑ
ÚÔÞ ˜ی ˜æä ÇäÊÀÇ áÇیÇ

Sehel-e-mumtinah kee khubsoorat misaal hai ye sh'er.

[sharib]

Ek bahot achcha sger dekhiye :

Ham rah ravan-e  rahe fana hain ba range umr
jawenge aise,  khoj bhee paya na jayega

wassalam

[sharib]

kya bala khez jaa hai koocha-e ishq
tum bhee yaan Meer mol  ek ghar  lo

ab neend kyoon ke aawe, garmee ne aashqee kee
dil hai jidhar woh pahloo,saara jala diya hai

Meer sahab rula gaye sab ko
kal woh tashreef yaan bhee laaye theiy

nazar Meer ne kaisee hasrat se kee
bahot roye ham uskee rukhsat ke baad

wassalam

[Syed Demanding]

ãیÑ ˜ÿ Ïیä æ ãÐÀÈ ˜æ ÇÈ æªÊÿ ˜یÇ Àæ ¡ Çä äÿ Êæ

ÞÔÞÀ ˜ªیäÇ ÏیÑ ãیŸ ÈیŠªÇ ¡ ˜È ˜Ç Êј ÇÓáÇã ˜یÇ

[Syed Demanding]

äÀ ÓæÇ äÀ ÓãÌªÇ äÀ Óی˜ªÇ äÀ ÌÇäÇ

ã̪ÿ  یÇ ÎæÏ ÈÎæÏ Ïá áÇäÇ

[SHAUZEB]

لاگ گر دل کو نہیں، لطف نہیں جینے کا
الجھے سلجھے کسی کاکل کے گرفتار رہو

Edited by SHAUZEB, 23 May 2010 - 03:53 PM.

[sharib]

SHAUZEB, on 23 May 2010 - 03:52 PM, said:

لاگ گر دل کو نہیں، لطف نہیں جینے کا
الجھے سلجھے کسی کاکل کے گرفتار رہو

Wah wah bhai kya mashwarah hai, aur shauzeb aap ne dhoondha bhee khoob.

Kya koee "kakul" mayassar huee .....

wassalam

Edited by sharib, 24 May 2010 - 05:32 AM.

[sharib]

" HOGA KISEE DEEWAAR KE SA-E KE TAL-E MEER
   KYA KAM MUHABBAT KO US ARAM TALAB SE"

Wassalam

[sharib]

Din raat meri chaatee jaltee hai muhabbat mein,
kya aur na thee jaaga(jagah)yeh aag jo yaan daabee

sau mulk phira lekin payee na wafa ek jaa
jee kha gayee hai mera is jins kee nayaabee


Jangal hee har-e tanha rone se nahin merey
kohoon ke kamar tak bhee jaa pahunchee hai seraabee

wassalam


ishq mein jee ko sabro taab kahaan
us-se aankhein lageen to khaab kahaan

girya-e shab se surkh hain aankhein
mujh bala-nosh ko sharaab kahan

ishq ka ghar hai Meer se abaad
Aise phir khanaman kharaab kahaan

Meer

[Syed Demanding]

Çõä äÿ ˜ªیäÇ Àÿ ãÑÿ ÀÇʪ Óÿ ÏÇãÇŸ ǁäÇ

˜یÇ ˜ÑæŸ Ñ äÀ ˜ÑæŸ Ç˜ ÑیÈÇŸ ǁäÇ

[sharib]

syed_demanding, on 28 May 2010 - 02:48 PM, said:

Çõä äÿ ˜ªیäÇ Àÿ ãÑÿ ÀÇʪ Óÿ ÏÇãÇŸ ǁäÇ

˜یÇ ˜ÑæŸ Ñ äÀ ˜ÑæŸ Ç˜ ÑیÈÇŸ ǁäÇ

Very good dear....achcha selection hai.  

On gareeban Meer has composed a wonderful sher ...never seen before:

"ab ke junoon mein faslah shayad na kuch rahe
daman  ke chaak aur gareebaan ke chaak mein"

wassalam