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[sharib]

دور بیٹھا غبارمیر اس سے
عشق بن یہ ادب نہیں آتا

Edited by sharib, 30 May 2010 - 11:27 AM.

[sharib]

kahein kya jo poocheey koe hum se Meer
jahan mein tum aaye theiy kya kar chale

ws

[khakay batool]

ãیÑ ˜ÿ Ïæ ÇÔÚÇÑ ÍÇÖÑ ÀیŸ¡




ãÊ ÓÀá ÀãیŸ ÌÇä桁ªÑÊÇ Àÿ ÝᘠÈÑÓæŸ

ÊÈ Îǘ ˜ÿ ÑÏÿ Óÿ ÇäÓÇä ä˜áÊÿ ÀیŸ



۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔


یÀ ÌÀá Ïی˜ª ˜À Çóä Óã̪ÿ ãیŸ ÇõŠªÇ áÇیÇ

ÑÇŸ æÀ ÈÇÑ Ìæ 滂 ÈیÔ Çäی ØÇÞÊ Óÿ

[sharib]

ãیÑ ˜ÿ Ïæ ÇÔÚÇÑ ÍÇÖÑ ÀیŸ¡




ãÊ ÓÀá ÀãیŸ ÌÇä桁ªÑÊÇ Àÿ ÝᘠÈÑÓæŸ

ÊÈ Îǘ ˜ÿ ÑÏÿ Óÿ ÇäÓÇä ä˜áÊÿ ÀیŸ



۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔۔


یÀ ÌÀá Ïی˜ª ˜À Çóä Óã̪ÿ ãیŸ ÇõŠªÇ áÇیÇ

ÑÇŸ æÀ ÈÇÑ Ìæ 滂 ÈیÔ Çäی ØÇÞÊ Óÿ

sher to dono achchey hain ,magar doosra sher is waqt bahot achcha maloom hua...

Ham log agar likhte to bin-samjhe likh dete...

Subhan Allah

[Faris-Al-Hujjat]

super amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[khakay batool]

sher to dono achchey hain ,magar doosra sher is waqt bahot achcha maloom hua...

Ham log agar likhte to bin-samjhe likh dete...

Subhan Allah

salam,

sach kaha aAp ney.

aik Farsi ka shair yaad aAgaya es waqt, aAp yaqeenan mehzooz hon gain.

آسماں بار ِامنت نتوانست کشید

قرعہء فال بنام ِمن ِدیوانہ زدند

laikin ye shair Hafiz Shirazi ka hai.

Edited by khakay batool, 09 June 2010 - 03:24 PM.

[khakay batool]

ÔÇã Àی Óÿ ÈÌªÇ ÓÇ ÑÀÊÇ Àÿ
Ïá Àÿ æیÇ ÑÇÛ ãÝáÓ ˜Ç

[sharib]

salam,

sach kaha aAp ney.

aik Farsi ka shair yaad aAgaya es waqt, aAp yaqeenan mehzooz hon gain.

ÂÓãÇŸ ÈÇÑ öÇãäÊ äÊæÇäÓÊ ˜ÔیÏ

ÞÑÚÀÁ ÝÇá ÈäÇã öãä öÏیæÇäÀ ÒÏäÏ

laikin ye shair Hafiz Shirazi ka hai.

Wah , bahot khoob.

ws

[khakay batool]

Wah , bahot khoob.

ws

salam aur shukriya

ye aAp tu samajh gaiye hon gain es liyie kisi naiye padhney walay key liyie apni ghalti ko dorust ker rehey hain.

pehley micrey mien TEESRA LAFZ ghalat hai. sahi lafz hai 'AMANAT'

''Asma'n bar e amanat natawanast kasheed''

ws

[sharib]

salam,


aAp key es shair per sharib ka manderjazail jawab..

tu kiya aAp hamari ''khawher'' nahi hain!!!!!!!!

hum tu shoro hi sey aAp ko 'khawher' samajh ker guftago ker rehey hain!!

tab bhi aAp ney nahi toka.


yahan bhi koi tardeed nahi hai es liyie......................bas dil dukh gaya es anhoni pe!

Salam ,

Yeh kya muamla hai bhai ,hum kuch relate nahin kar paa rahein hain...zara samjhaiye.

wassalam

[Syed Demanding]

äÇÒ˜ ãÒÇÌ Â ÞیÇãÊ ÀیŸ ãیÑ Ìی

ÌæŸ ÔیÔÀ ãیÑÿ ãäÀ äÀ áæ¡ ãیŸ äÔÿ ãیŸ ÀæŸ

[khakay batool]

PATEY HAIN APNEY HAAL MIEN MAJBOOR SAB KO HUM
KEHNEY KO IKHTEYAAR HAI PER IKHTEYAR KIY!

MEER

[sharib]

"Meer ke deeno-mazhab ko kya pooche ho un-ne to

Qashqa khaincha ,dahr mein baitha, kab ka tarak islam kiya."

[uroojchap]

Hi… that was great stuff.. I really like this subject. Could you tell me more … I would love to explore.

[uroojchap]

very nice..

Meer Taqi Meer

[sharib]

very nice..

Meer Taqi Meer

Thanks uroojchap for interest in this thread. Not geeting time ,would write more very shortly.

Meer Saheb zamaana nazuk hai

Dono haathon se thamiye dastaar.

[Syed Demanding]

ÇÈÊÏÇ Àی Óÿ ÑãæÒö ÚÔÞ Óÿ æÇÞÝ ÀیŸ Àã

šª áیÿ ʪÿ ÔÚÑ Èä ãیŸ ãیÑ ˜ÿ

[Syed Demanding]

Àã Àæۓ Êã Àæۓ ˜À ãیÑ Àæۓ
ÇÓ ˜ی ÒáÝæŸ ˜ÿ ÓÈ ÇÓیÑ Àæۓ

ãیÑ ÊÞی ãیÑ

[sharib]

Ghalib apna yeh aqueedah hai baqual-e Nasikh
Aap be bahra hai jo mo-taqid-e Meer nahin

[Syed Demanding]

یÏÇ ˜ÀÇŸ ÀیŸ ÇیÓÿ ÑǐäÏÀ ØÈÚ áæ
ÇÝÓæÓ Êã ˜æ ãیÑ Óÿ ÕÍÈÊ äÀیŸ ÑÀی

[sharib]

ankhon mein ji mera hai idhar yar dekhna
ashiq ka apane akhri didar dekhna

kaisa chaman ke ham se asiron ko man-aa hai
chake qafas se baagh kee dewaar dekhna


Meer Taqi Meer

Edited by sharib, 21 November 2011 - 06:38 AM.

[M.N.A.]

[Syed Demanding]

ÇÊäی Ȫی ÈÏ ãÒÇÌی ÀÑ áÍÙÀ ãیÑ Êã ˜æ
Çá̪ÇÄ Àÿ ÒãیŸ Óÿ ¡ ̪šÇ Àÿ ÂÓãÇŸ Óÿ

[Syed Demanding]

ãیÑ ÚãÏÇð Ȫی ˜æÆی ãÑÊÇ Àÿ
ÌÇä Àÿ Êæ ÌÀÇä Àÿ یÇÑÿ

[Syed Demanding]

یوں تو دس گز کی زباں ہم بھی بتاں رکھتے ہیں
بات کو طول نہیں دیتے خدا کے ڈر سے

مہر کی اس سے توقع غلطی اپنی تھی
کہیں دلداری ہوئی بھی ہے کسو دلبر سے؟

(میر تقی میر)