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[sharib]

Salam ,

Among the new faces coming up in Urdu Poetry, Maulana Dr.Shabih Ahsan Kazmi is  not only noticeable but his  "Tasbeeh" is worth reading  also. Maulana is Zakir of Repute .

As usual before I say something about his collection , his ashaar will give you his introduction in this thread.

I am giving here  those mutaffarriq  ashaar which have appealed me.

suraj kee sarparasti se nuqsaan yeh hua
ab sham-a maangta hun to deta nahin koee


tamam shehr ke chan-de se jalne waala charaagh
haamaare ghar ke ujaalon mein aib dhoondta hai.

yeh aur baat ke phal mere ghar bhee aate hain
magar woh ped kisee aur kee zameen per hai

tu apne khet kee shadaabiyon pe fakhr na kar
mere he gaaon ka baadal wahaan barasta hai

maien jab se asmaa(n) ko chhu ke aaya
zameenein meri dushman ho gayeen hain


to be contd

[khakay batool]

sharib, on 23 March 2010 - 01:03 PM, said:

Salam ,

Among the new faces coming up in Urdu Poetry, Maulana Dr.Shabih Ahsan Kazmi is  not only noticeable but his  "Tasbeeh" is worth reading  also. Maulana is Zakir of Repute .

As usual before I say something about his collection , his ashaar will give you his introduction in this thread.

I am giving here  those mutaffarriq  ashaar which have appealed me.

suraj kee sarparasti se nuqsaan yeh hua
ab sham-a maangta hun to deta nahin koee


tamam shehr ke chan-de se jalne waala charaagh
haamaare ghar ke ujaalon mein aib dhoondta hai.

yeh aur baat ke phal mere ghar bhee aate hain
magar woh ped kisee aur kee zameen per hai

tu apne khet kee shadaabiyon pe fakhr na kar
mere he gaaon ka baadal wahaan barasta hai

maien jab se asmaa(n) ko chhu ke aaya
zameenein meri dushman ho gayeen hain


to be contd

salam,

bohat acha entekhab hai.  aik adad nai shaiir ko hum ney bhi padha, bas hamari hi himmat thee key aik achey shair key liyie sab ka sab padh dala laikin mayusi hovi.  
aur kisi achey naiye shair ka naam bataain jw key Molana nahi hon.  aAp kiya sarey shuAra hamaisha Qom hi sey entekhab ker laitey hain!

ws

[sharib]

khakay batool, on 23 March 2010 - 04:21 PM, said:

salam,

bohat acha entekhab hai.

Shair muhtaram khush honge sun kar , shukria bahot

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aik adad nai shaiir ko hum ney bhi padha, bas hamari hi himmat thee key aik achey shair key liyie sab ka sab padh dala laikin mayusi hovi.  

Afsos hua...bahot takleef hotee hai ghair meyaari adab padh ker .

Aglee baar kis "qum wale ko talash karien"

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aur kisi achey naiye shair ka naam bataain jw key Molana nahi hon.  aAp kiya sarey shuAra hamaisha Qom hi sey entekhab ker laitey hain!
ws

Is nazariye se kabhi socha hee nahin, shukria aap kaa.
Badah- khaanon ka rukh bhee zaroor karoonga , non Maulana shair kee talash mein...aap ka mashwara jo thehra

Magar wahan bhee " wohee kaafir sanam nikle " to kya hoga

wassalam

Edited by sharib, 24 March 2010 - 01:53 AM.

[sharib]

Salam ,

Inhee ka Ek aur sher dekein ;

Asman uska nahin jiske hon baal-o par bade
Asman uska hai jismein quwaate parwaz hai

wassalam

[khakay batool]

sharib, on 24 March 2010 - 01:46 AM, said:

Shair muhtaram khush honge sun kar , shukria bahot



Afsos hua...bahot takleef hotee hai ghair meyaari adab padh ker .

Aglee baar kis "qum wale ko talash karien"




Is nazariye se kabhi socha hee nahin, shukria aap kaa.
Badah- khaanon ka rukh bhee zaroor karoonga , non Maulana shair kee talash mein...aap ka mashwara jo thehra

Magar wahan bhee " wohee kaafir sanam nikle " to kya hoga

wassalam

salam,

hamara mashwara tu koi bhi nahi tha es post mien. aik aap ki rai li thee kisi nai shaiir key liyie aur aik sawal tha

ye dar tu hamaisha rehey ga. Qom waley hi theek hain.

ws

[sharib]

khakay batool, on 25 March 2010 - 03:16 PM, said:

salam,

hamara mashwara tu koi bhi nahi tha es post mien. aik aap ki rai li thee kisi nai shaiir key liyie aur aik sawal tha

ye dar tu hamaisha rehey ga. Qom waley hi theek hain.

ws

Shukria.

Leejiye ek ghazal Shabeeh bhai kee irsaal hai  aap sab ke liye.

Damagh dil se agar ashna nahin hota,
To meri aankhon se dariya baha nahin hota

Hamaare paas khuda aur na-khuda dono
Sawaal unka hai jinka Khuda nahin hota

Nikhaarta hai paseena hayat ka chehra
Enaayton se kisee ka bhala nahin hota

tamaam rishton ka meyaar jeb kee halchal
wagar na koee kisi ka saga nahin hota

yeh aur baat ke sanbhla rahe koee warna,
tabeeatan to koee paarsa nahin hota.

wassalam

[sharib]

Salam ,

ek aur ghazal dekhiye:

                               "bewah"

kisi kee yadon mein kuch itna kho gayee bewah
sawanr ke saj ke akele hi so gayee bewah

kuch is tarah sr badha-iee thee churian us ne
har ek aankh mein motee piro gayee bewah

udas aankhon ke bheege huae sawalon se
mere sha-oo-r ka takiya bhigo gayee bewah

yeh tanz usne zamaane pe bar bar kiya
ke muskuraate huae raakh ho gayee bewah

yeh kashmakash ke agar pyaar kee nigahon se
kisi ne dekha to naraaz ho gayee bewah

Shabeeh koee to jazba tha jis ke qatl hua
dikhaee de gayee mehndi to ro gayee bewah.


wassalam

Edited by sharib, 01 April 2010 - 04:33 AM.

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sharib, on 01 April 2010 - 04:32 AM, said:

Salam ,

ek aur ghazal dekhiye:

                               "bewah"

kisi kee yadon mein kuch itna kho gayee bewah
sawanr ke saj ke akele hi so gayee bewah

kuch is tarah sr badha-iee thee churian us ne
har ek aankh mein motee piro gayee bewah

udas aankhon ke bheege huae sawalon se
mere sha-oo-r ka takiya bhigo gayee bewah

yeh tanz usne zamaane pe bar bar kiya
ke muskuraate huae raakh ho gayee bewah

yeh kashmakash ke agar pyaar kee nigahon se
kisi ne dekha to naraaz ho gayee bewah

Shabeeh koee to jazba tha jis ke qatl hua
dikhaee de gayee mehndi to ro gayee bewah.


wassalam

salam,


'shaoor key takiya' ka jawab nahi
wesey ye ghazal kehlaai jaai gi key hazal mien aaiye gi?
samajh mien nahi aAraha hai key hans ain ya roaain!

ws

[sharib]

khakay batool, on 01 April 2010 - 02:19 PM, said:

salam,


'shaoor key takiya' ka jawab nahi
wesey ye ghazal kehlaai jaai gi key hazal mien aaiye gi?
samajh mien nahi aAraha hai key hans ain ya roaain!

ws

Salam , kahna to sahee aap ka ......

maqam rone ka hee hai ......aise halat mein jab society kisi bewah ka dard na samajhtee ho.

Islam ne is masa-le ka bahot umda hal nikaala hai ........ LIMITED POLYGAMY  ko jaiz kar ke ... aur sab se badee cheez yeh ke Marriage ko contract  ka darja diya jis se woh sab faltoo batien ....that marriages are made in heaven so divorce is illegal , widow shd not re-marry have come to a check......


wassalam

[khakay batool]

sharib, on 01 April 2010 - 09:58 PM, said:

Salam , kahna to sahee aap ka ......

maqam rone ka hee hai ......aise halat mein jab society kisi bewah ka dard na samajhtee ho.

Islam ne is masa-le ka bahot umda hal nikaala hai ........ LIMITED POLYGAMY  ko jaiz kar ke ... aur sab se badee cheez yeh ke Marriage ko contract  ka darja diya jis se woh sab faltoo batien ....that marriages are made in heaven so divorce is illegal , widow shd not re-marry have come to a check......


wassalam

salam,

lagta hai key aAp kisi ghair  Islami mashrey mien rehetain hain jahan logon ney Islam ki naikiyon ko apna liya hai. fi zamana bhi, Islami mashrey mien log patharon key zamaney key usoolon per zinda hain aur aik bewa ya divorce shuda  khatoon aaj bhi enhi fersooda rsoomaat mien gheri hovi hai.

ye baat tu hai key ye roney ka maqam hai laikin aAp es kalam ko kisi mushairey mien padhiyie tu phir dekhiyie ga key log kesy sirf hansi  mien baat udha den gain.  ye sochey baghair key wo kis baat per hans rehey hain!!


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[sharib]

khakay batool, on 03 April 2010 - 08:39 AM, said:

salam,

lagta hai key aAp kisi ghair  Islami mashrey mien rehetain hain jahan logon ney Islam ki naikiyon ko apna liya hai. fi zamana bhi, Islami mashrey mien log patharon key zamaney key usoolon per zinda hain aur aik bewa ya divorce shuda  khatoon aaj bhi enhi fersooda rsoomaat mien gheri hovi hai.

ye baat tu hai key ye roney ka maqam hai laikin aAp es kalam ko kisi mushairey mien padhiyie tu phir dekhiyie ga key log kesy sirf hansi  mien baat udha den gain.  ye sochey baghair key wo kis baat per hans rehey hain!!


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Salam,

I can understand the concern in your writing.

Bernard Shaw once said  "Islam is the best religion but muslims are the  worst followers".....that goes very well...

It is unfortunate that widow re-marriage and right to property for women has been taken by the modern civilaztion and many religions from Islam only yet muslims themselves are not utilising these things in true spirit ,particularly in this sub continent.

Nevertheless , it is the religion Islam which has mandatory provisions and optional solutions for such situations .....the "muta" also comes under such optional provisions that might be required by the society at times.

wassalam

[sharib]

Salam ,

aap hazrat kee rai is shair ke bare mein zaroori hai .....

Kahiye to kekaise shair hain.....

wassalam