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#1 Sehnsucht

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Posted 26 November 2006 - 07:14 PM

I always had a great fascination with the stories & images of the honorable steed, and it definitely seems, true to form, that the horse itself was consciously a devoted servant of the Ahlul Bayt (as).
Here's my interpretation on the noble creature's percepts of Karbala.


Zuljanah's Narrative

The sun blazed in burning fury, setting fire to the sand,
On which the great Imam, was to take his final stand.
He motioned me to go, saying 'O my faithful horse,
Let me meet my bitter destiny, on fate's awaiting course.'
I tried to move yet found I couldn't, for my legs were being held,
'Do not go, o Zuljanah,' my immobility seemed to yell.

I turned my gaze below, to the burning desert ground;
And here a sobbing little girl, to my agony I found.
The child with desperation, was weeping silent tears,
Bewildered she choked, 'Zuljanah, don't take my father dear.'
The weakened little girl, so deprived of food and water,
Was indeed masoom Sakina, my master's dearest daughter.

'My ever-faithful charger, why don't you move ahead?'
In response to master's question, I tilted down my head.
His eyes beheld Sakina, and he hugged her with a cry,
And asked her please to let him go; to let her father die.

Sakina looked at him, her eyes ablaze with pain,
"O father," she said chokingly, "With my blessing, go be slain,
But promise me, my father, one day to take me too,
for how can this Sakina, live her life away from you?"

Hussain said, "yes Sakina, I promise what you say,
Now you make me too a promise, and recall it every day.
My innocent Sakina, when I die you will be choked;
When you shed a tear for me, you will be beaten and provoked.
So promise me my daughter, you'll be patient through all this."
At this he gave his little girl, a bitter goodbye kiss.

She nodded wordlessly, as I stood there, crying too,
For witnessing such tragic scene would any heart subdue.
Master willed her to be patient, and to try to cease her tears,
And then he rose a final time, knowing death was very near.

He hugged his little princess, and set her on the ground;
Both lacquered in a dazing grief, immeasurably profound.
He mounted me again, and bade his sweet good bye.
And then we rode away, to where my master was to die.

Alas while in prostration, my master dear was slaughtered;
in the agonizing state, of being three days without water.

And yes those evil brutes, they laughed without remorse,
While even I was crying; the wounded, silent horse.

I walked back to the tents, where a lady stumbled, dazed,
as she watched my master's head, upon a spear that had been raised.
I trudged up to this woman, and she saw me and cried out,
'You left with my Husain, and you came back here without!'
She hugged me and she wept, pain stabbing both our hearts,
As forever was this woman, from her brother torn apart.

Splattered on my frame that day, was the blood of God's adored;
And hence for such an honor, I will be remembered evermore.


© Rubab Zaidi

Edited by LightTheWay786, 04 December 2006 - 02:59 AM.


#2 scarymuslimah

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Posted 27 November 2006 - 05:41 PM

good subject! I wrote one too, a while ago:

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I tried to find Him on the Christian cross, but He
was not there; I went to the Temple of the
Hindus and to the old pagodas, but I could not
find a trace of Him anywhere.

I searched on the mountains and in the valleys
but neither in the heights nor in the depths was I
able to find Him. I went to the Ka'bah in Mecca,
but He was not there either.

I questioned the scholars and philosophers but
He was beyond their understanding.

I then looked into my heart and it was there
where He dwelled that I saw Him; He was
nowhere else to be found.


-Jalaludin Rumi

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Posted 27 November 2006 - 08:16 PM

(salam)

Beautifully written LightTheWay786. The narration stabs you in the heart...continue writing.


Wassalam

Edited by Noor-Alhuda, 27 November 2006 - 08:21 PM.

خلنبني العراق من جنوبة لشمالة
مرمر من دهوك وجص من ديالى
رمل من كربلاء وماي من هور العمارة
خبز النجف، و ﭼاي حلاوي
العشا عندي لا تقولون مصلاوي


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Posted 27 November 2006 - 08:20 PM

(salam)
:cry: Beautifully written sister. Very touching.

#5 Aal-e-Imran

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Posted 27 November 2006 - 08:22 PM

Birthday 23 July 1991


:blink: You sure about that?! That was very well written :blink:! Wow, keep it up!

Edited by Ali_Imran, 27 November 2006 - 08:23 PM.


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Posted 27 November 2006 - 09:42 PM

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@ sis scarymuslimah::

Your poem is hauntingly, incredibly beautiful.

I saw the narrative played out in a chilling fashion I had never before fathomed...

Jazak'Allah sis! May Allah ÓÈÍÇäå æÊÚÇáì bless you for your heartfelt commemoration of a less-visited aspect of the ultimate sacrifice.


@ sis Noor-Alhuda::

Thank you sis... Insh'Allah we'll all have the lifelong opportunity to express oureselves in a manner pleasing to Allah ÓÈÍÇäå æÊÚÇáì. :)


@ sis Laraib::

Thanks very much dear sis!! :)


@ bro Ali Imran::

Yep... As much as I would love to speed or slow things at times, I'm definitely at year 15 until the next July 23 rolls around...
Being "wise beyond your years" yourself from what I've seen (or at the very least, a mighty talented spammer), that shouldn't be too hard to believe. ^_^

Thanks!

By the way, you've got some very interesting & creative works @ DA mash'Allah!

#7 Aal-e-Imran

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Posted 27 November 2006 - 09:57 PM

Being "wise beyond your years" yourself from what I've seen (or at the very least, a mighty talented spammer), that shouldn't be too hard to believe.


:dry: I'm not as childish in real life as I act over-here :dry: *hope not*

By the way, you've got some very interesting & creative works @ DA mash'Allah!


Same for your poetry @ DA you should upload this one as well -_-.

Edited by Ali_Imran, 27 November 2006 - 09:59 PM.


#8 Sehnsucht

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Posted 27 November 2006 - 10:09 PM

:dry: I'm not as childish in real life as I act over-here :dry: *hope not*


LoL don't worry... I meant to say that from what I've seen here, you do seem quite wise & mature.

...And in any case, I'm sure within even the strictest of adults there's a little bit of child always wishing to come out! Remembering one's childhood is a very humanizing experience...
And no matter how old, cracking out with a good game of 'chuppan chupayi' can be great for your health! ^_^

Same for your poetry @ DA you should upload this one as well -_-.


Insh'Allah I will... I have a huge amount of things I still want to upload, but simply locating them ironically takes a lot of time as my files are junkpiled with randomosity. :)

Edited by LightTheWay786, 27 November 2006 - 10:12 PM.


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Posted 27 November 2006 - 10:20 PM

you do seem quite wise & mature


Okay don't push it either :lol:

Insh'Allah I will... I have a huge amount of things I still want to upload, but simply locating them ironically takes a lot of time as my files are junkpiled with randomosity.


Oh cool, please share your other work here as well if you don't mind, I'm sure people would like to read em' :).

Edited by Ali_Imran, 27 November 2006 - 10:21 PM.


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Posted 27 November 2006 - 10:27 PM

Okay don't push it either :lol:


I call 'em as I see 'em. B)

Oh cool, please share your other work here as well if you don't mind, I'm sure people would like to read em' :).


Insh'Allah. Thanks for the encouragement! ^_^

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Posted 28 November 2006 - 03:22 AM

(salam)

Excellent work lil one :P. Keep it up. May Allah always be with you!

With lots of duas,
Wa'Salam.

Our sins strike him like arrows.
When he examines the scrolls of our deeds,
He weeps at our sins.

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May Allah hasten his Reappearance
Curse be Upon the Enemies of Imam Ali (as)


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Posted 28 November 2006 - 03:58 AM

MashaAllah

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Posted 28 November 2006 - 05:56 PM

(salam)

Excellent work lil one :P. Keep it up. May Allah always be with you!

With lots of duas,
Wa'Salam.


Thanks very much, dear bro! :)

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Posted 30 November 2006 - 08:43 AM

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Nice Mash'Allah :)

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Posted 04 December 2006 - 02:37 AM

MashaAllah



ditto. MashaAllah. powerful piece.

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Posted 04 December 2006 - 03:00 AM

^ Thanks very much to both! :)



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